I didn't see any mistakes, I liked the chapter. A little bit of sweet stuff and a little tease of rough waters ahead.

I love it all. Please continue! This is now my favorite pairing for Tsuna. Isn't that funny?

Welk well, Tsuna getting a bit cheeky

I really like how you don't have them tell their feelings and keep the suspense going, but oh boy; it's tearing me apart! Figuratively. The chemestry you give them is amazing; and the characters seem just that, in character. As always look forward to the next chapter with eager attention.

No! Tsuna don't stop there! I like the pace of the story and this is the first time I read a story with Tsuna and MM pairings. It's not common but I ship them both so hard here.

Gokudera as a wingman for Tsuna, that I got to see

Thanks to you a crackship has become one of my actual ships. Excellent work, I can't wait for the next chapter.

For your: au revoir ma cherie, it's not accurate. If it's M.M who said that it's: Au revoir mon cher, and if it's Tsuna: Au revoir, ma chère

My only complaint is "too short" but that may be me just being greedy, good work.

...Well, it's all on M.M. now. Eh...for Tsuna's sake, I hope she doesn't blow up.

I like this fic, it's simple but also pretty nice :) And what a nice idea with so rare paring! The romance is maybe a little rushed, considering that they didn’t really interacted that much before 1st chapter, but putting that aside, the story has a rather good pace. M.M. maybe doesn’t really resemble her canon self but somehow it doesn’t matter – this version of her is just likeable :)
What I don’t like is the repeats of certain scenes in first few chapters – they are a little too similar...

Thank you for writing this story and good luck! :)

*snort, snickering* Ah, poor M.M. She's going on a date, and doesn't really have a choice in it. I'll pass on the cookies.

Sweet love virtual cookies also glad you're back looking forward to the next update wondering hi M.M. is going to react as for the length im just glad you updated till next time.
Later Daze

Damn I guess thems the brakes but thanks fir the warning until November hopefully I bid you adieu
Later Daze

*soft hum* M.M. is getting kinder. Or maybe she just has a soft spot for Nana. It's kinda hard not to. (Yet other reason why some many people hate Iemitsu. Nana is too kind to have her heart broken by such a... *presses lips together, furious*)