Great attention to detail!

A descriptive, well-written account of Jago's crisis of faith.

This was... Really good, actually. Were you ever planning on writing more?

Excellent work on this one! I'd be interested to see if you plan on reworking this based on what we know of Shadow Jago's story so far!

I am so flabbergasted that this fanfic has only one review, when it deserves sooooo much more. I was lucky enough to find this from a random search for good Killer Instinct stories, as I'd just fallen in love with the series since the start of 2014.

I am hoping you plan to do more fics like this. You really brought Jago to life through this entry. Well done!

Fun fact: I was listening to Jago's theme from the new KI game while reading this. :)

This is well-written with an interesting character. Sounds like the beginning of something, not a one-shot, but remember that this is outside my genre.

One nitpicky thing- you don't need to change to present tense in your final sentence.