This actually seems like it could be a really interesting story...
...with a messed up twist ending that destroys my feels.
... Do it.

Daw! That was wonderful! Steven and Rose are reunited!
If you do make this a full story, that would be wonderful. But it's great as just a one-shot too. Good job, friend!

Hey GuitarGirl. I'm surprised to see you write a Steven Universe fic, but it's a great show, so I can't complain about that.

I've read your other stories and probably faved them under my GF account, TheFallingPenguin. I'm not sure if you've read my stories for that. Oh well...
I advise you to continue this cause it's very good. Although I'm confused on how Rose is alive, but it'll all be probably explained later. :)

-GG

This looks like a pretty good story so far. Well written, good pacing and the characters are being themselves. Already I'm enjoying how this story is setup.

I look forward to the next chapter when it comes out. Until then, great job on this story.

You accidentally posted the whole story twice.