Reviews for The Sister's Arc, Alternative |
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Xeno01 chapter 3 . 8/31/2018 Exelent story, why did not it continue? |
Aries infinity chapter 3 . 3/8/2016 please update ! i would really like to see how miskaa mikoto reacts to her sisters xD |
5 years of fun chapter 3 . 11/15/2015 Looking forward to the next chapter no matter how long it will take. |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/2/2015 I ant wait for next chapter. Pls update soon! Love it and I'm curious in what would happen! Thank you for writing the story ;) |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/5/2015 Great chapter, continue with the good work |
NamikazeAi-chan chapter 3 . 1/30/2015 Please write next charper |
Sebaspe chapter 3 . 12/11/2014 I like the pairing AccelXMikoto. Please update soon. |
Kazrack chapter 3 . 11/3/2014 Awesome, please continue |
crissylover chapter 3 . 11/1/2014 Hmmm... Nice chapter. I hope you will update soon and... I know it's not labeled as romance but I hope that this will be an AccelxMikoto fic. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. |
Naruto0116 chapter 3 . 11/1/2014 Cool chapter. Too much Touma. Not enough Accelerator. But take your time seriously. No need to rush. |
azix39 chapter 2 . 9/20/2014 Hmm...this integrates me. I demand another chapter...please? |
lui chapter 2 . 9/8/2014 More! |
Mystearical chapter 1 . 7/9/2014 The very first sentence of your story is one massive run-on that makes up its own paragraph and contains nine commas. This is indicative of the quality of the rest of the chapter. You have a good idea here, but your execution is frankly subpar. I would suggest you locate yourself a beta reader to go over your work before you post it as well as help you iron out the mechanical errors in the chapters you've already published. |
Proxy4818 chapter 2 . 7/1/2014 You've got off to a decent start but I should probably tell you that Misaka already knew accelerator before touma in cannon. That being said I'm still looking forward to seeing what you do. |
BlueStarDust3578 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014 I'm interested to see what would happen next, good job for now :) |