Wolf dead? Seriously?!

It seems a bit rushed? confused?
Don't misunderstand me-I really like the plot and the whole idea-I've been looking for something like that for a long time, but I find this story a bit hard to follow and it's a bit out of character?
But don't worry-I will continue with reading ;)

911 is the American emergency number.
999 is englands.
112 is the EUs

There all fandom names
Woohoo

omg, don't leave us hanging here.
please continue this awesome story

*sigh* yup, it happened, your fanfic is ruined in my opinion. Also: fourteen?! Oh. Sorry if I offended you with my terrible she guessing skills it just didn't seem like something that anyone over thirteen would ask. I'm just going to stop reading here because I can't deal with this sort of... ugh.

Your grammar is a bit off so I can't tell whether you're dyslexic, having problems with your phone, or whether English might not be your first language. I think Charlotte is an unnecessary character who's obviously going to end up in some sort of relationship with Alex after explaining her horrid backstory (whatever that might be), making her cliche and predictable as well. As for the question of your age, it's hard to tell on the internet but I'd say you were thirteen or younger judging by the fact you actually asked that question as if to show off. But again it's hard to tell since I'm often able to write a while fanfic or have a conversation with someone before anyone realises I've only just turned thirteen. Aside from the grammar and bad OC it's interesting, but often fanfics may spiral into a burning mess of cliches and terrible plots so I won't judge too soon.

I very much liked your story, and I am curious to know what will happen next. I have no clue how old you are, but I'll guess 14.

Wow u update fast. Thanks for the pm and i was wondering if u would bring all of k unit back with a special reunion and maybe play a prank on them. Thanks and update soon!

Ahhhhhhh! Seriously heartbreaking! I really hope you don't split them up and thanks for updating.

No! Charlie smaks him. Then joins MI6

Omg omg omg ! Thanks so much for updating, plz write more

Why did you do a cliffy I am just dying right now ! What happens now!?

I like you kiddo I think your story has potential you've done a good job in portraying realism however just remember that mi6 and Alex are British.
911 is for America ;)
Good work though keep it up

I can't wait to find out what happens next!