I really like your storyy...so could you please continue?

By FAR the best chapter so far! The scene in the church was so well done (yay for Sophia- "He's still in control!"), and I loved the dialogue throughout. I love the painting idea, and the tie-in to October 1st was great... hey, with all the other futurist gadgets he's made, why couldn't Rambaldi make a modern-looking watch?

Married "a good person"... lol!

No doubt I'm a pathetic romantic, but the idea of Syd and Vaughn having this timeless connection is beautiful.

more!

Awsome idea! I never would have thought of that. I really like the way you use words too! Can't wait to see the next part.

that was the best most original awesomest thing i have read in a long time! i have chills it was so good!

Okay your story is soooo awesome. I think that it is soo adoreable. The whole thing about the hatred being passed on through the generations and the parrallel of Sophia's and Anastaisia's life to Sydney's and Irena's. I love it. I actually think it could work in the show. If not than Irina has to be evil and I don't want her to be evil. Please keep going this is so good.

Perfect! just perfect! really amazing. How did you come up with this? It really fits the story well. Keep going, you are truely gifted!

ack! i love it! i love it! it's sappy but we all need a little sap in our lives, don't we. very cool! i would've never thought of that!

Oh, I love the way you tied it all together! I can't wait for the present and future!

LB-I LOVE IT! I see genius in your creativity and story line-after all it is entertainment, not reality! So, the lack of logic at times doesn't bother me, although it might hinder others. I really, really enjoyed this... Looking forward to your present and future... loved the connection to Oct 1, 2001! OH

Absolutely gorgeous writing. You have a great eye for detail and your rwiting style flows really well. You've come up with an intriguing plot and I can't wait to see where you end up. Great job!

Wow! I think I may be hooked! I don't watch a lot of Alias, but I'll tell you what, if this person wrote for it I think I might be temted to watch more. I like her vivid usage of words to paint a pictures of the story! I can't wait to read the next one.

This is really intriguing! Frankly, I just really want to know what happens!

"Behind a pretty painting is an intricately woven canvas, hidden and often forgotten; once the rain falls and the storm blows, causing the oils melt away, its strength and endurance is revealed."

That's just an incredible sentence.

I'm loving the little things. Green eyes, dimpled chin. Truth takes time. And the phrase "time lives longer" is so good.

Also, cool interpretation of "the beauty of Mt. Sabasio."

OK, LB, this is getting really, really exceptionally good! Simple, yet arresting! You are full of surprises! Looking forward to how you "connect" all the dots... as time passes by...(Ha!Ha!) Really entertaining and enjoyable, for sure.

Oh, I hope you continue. It's very good and not too hard to understand.