Ha! Great timing for a visitor!

So sweet

Oh man, things are feeling pretty helpless right now!

I had to pause and comment on how incredibly well structured and written this is. I paused at chapter two last night, and then dreamed about this - sooo compelling!

aaand... you lost me. same old cliche bullshit plot. Read this a thousand times, will probably see it a thousand more.

: )

I just finished this entire story in 3 days! I loved every second of it, this is such a beautiful story.

Bravo

Loved this so very much! Very beautifully written.
Thank you so much!

I just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed your story :-) It was a delight to read and kept me riveted to see what was going to happen next :-) THANK YOU for taking soooo much time from RL to share your story! Good Luck with your original fiction :-)

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Beautiful storyline..

this was a great concept and wonderfully executed! I loved the story!

amazing story! I haven't read anything near as good as this in a very long time. so glad I stumbled across it.

Omg wow. I adore this story more than I can describe. Thank you so much! Amazing job

oh nooo isn't Claire Quill's imprint?