Jenna is my favourite tribute so far, then again we have only had three reapings, so i'll have to wait and see! And she sang 'The Hanging Tree' if I remember correctly. :3 (BTW, please could you add Velveteen to the tribute list? Thanks! :)

She sang the hanging tree

Your story giving me great ideas for my SYOT!

The idea of having dinosaurs in the hunger games is a great and original idea

katniss sings a song called the hanging tree

Name: Evelyn and Jaxon White they are twins

Age:17

District:8 or wherever you need them

volunteer or reaped? Reaped

outfits:both in green and white

Backstory: lost their mother in labor and their dad works all the time

Personality:very protective of one another

Family: just their dad

Friends: stick to themselves

weapon: Evelyn-Throwing Knives or a Dart gun Jaxon-axe or spear

Will they make allies? No

Will they kill?: yes

What death would you like your character to have?:preferably not the blood battle and would like them to last as long as possible

Skills: Evelyn-Agility and Speed Jaxon-strength and accuracy

Weakness:Evelyn-Smaller Jaxon-temper

Lookalike: Evelyn-Kinda like Kelli pickler but young and Jaxon-Mason Dye

Strategy: to protect one another and win

Opinion on Games: it just a game and the goal is to win

Opinion on Twists: just makes the game harder

Opinion on Capital: hate them. They think they had something to do with twins being reaped

Anything else?: anything else you would like to add to make them seem better

The hanging tree

Hello person. Good chapter. Although some spelling could be corrected, but other than that its very good. Also great representation of my character. Thank you for making him a good character. Also i should have more poinys than what i have because i reviewed last chapter, followed and favorited both you and the story. Dont think im mad, text is hard at emotions.

Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter.

cant wait for next chapter

That was so awesome! Though, I suggest that you put in some action! (IDK LIKE A FIGHT?) I don't know just some critiscm.

Nice chapters I think I like Jenna better of the two, probably because Lucas barely got any POV. I would suggest giving them equal amounts of POV. But it's really good, Lucas seems like a typical career and Jenna will be really interesting. Update soon!

I really, really like the way you are starting this! I think the characters have a memorable personality, so I'll be able to remember them! Some advice, I think you should do two Reapings in one chapter, to make them longer and more exciting! Anyway, can't wait until the games!

My characters not in district 1 so I cant comment on the characters...yet. But I can compliment on this. You have great word usage, spelling, blah blah blah. In other words great chapter.

cant wait to read more!