I can't tell yo how many times I've come back to read this and every single time I do I cry. It's so achingly beautiful so I just wanted to say thank you.

That was just...wow...

I am so glad I'm in a public place, because I would have had so many feels hit me all throughout this. I honestly don't know how else to say this... But that was amazing. Omg that was fantastic! The writing, the very small amount of plot (albeit, amazing as shit). Everything was just... Ugh! God I really wanted to cry, but I'm near people and lol nah. But yeah, I loved this. Thank you XD

this was so ridiculously beautiful I love this

Thus far this is definitely my favorite of yours. Your fluffs are always beautiful and amazing, but the darker, grimmer sides of life always entrance me. Love what you did with this, and how they both steered each other's life into a better one. This was truly beautifulX'''D

This is amazing. Just amazing. Thanks for writing this.

Just like many other stories of yours (that I have yet to review), I really liked this one. It treats a subject that many people choose to believe that it doesn't exist: suicide. Desperation. Hopelessness. The idea of your life not being worth shit (I hope I said this one right). I'm glad it has a happy ending, since I had my fill of drama and death for this month (if not year - damn a certain writer for her really good, but terribly sad stories!). And the idea of making your own wings... It should be a life philosophy.
Keep up the good work and may your muse be with you!

This was very heart wrenching at the end,
But it lost something, as well.
It was beautiful and I loved it, their being free, but...
It would have made so much more sense if they had become more familiar in the final moments of the story and decided to end their lives together.
Tightly clutching one another's hands, the wings trailing out behind them, they would leave the unforgiving lives they were cursed with. Together, now and forever, in oblivion.

THAT WAS SO ADORABLE IM DYING! You are amazing! Thank you for contributing this story to the world!

Wow that was really cool. It made me feel real good inside. Loved it!

that is a very sweet story.
Grimmjow's answer saying why his grandma lived so long because she minded her own business was priceless. Yeah did good. It wsas a very sweet story and it goes to show that sometimes a good story need a plotline not just a bountiful amount of sex. Sex is just a juicy bonus.

that was really good. you never know when hope will come.

This is absolutely beautiful! Definitely on par with the thoughts and emotions. The both of you are geniuses. :)

Omg, you know you're wrong for this...it was too beautiful...I can't even...I'm near tears, man, and I never cry, like never...the message is so profound, and I love how you manage to portray it in a way that's appealing to the masses; it's something you do in everything you write...I am so glad to have had the opportunity to work on this with you, and I hope we get to work together again in the future...

P.s: I am soooo pissed that I didn't get to review first! They called me in to work (and on my fucking day off too!) so I didn't get to read it until now:(

.Amazing! I hope you write more stuff like this or do more collabs. Hat's off to you both!