This is so cool! I feel like a lot of SI fics tend to make the character, like, super aware of the fact they were reborn in the world, so much that they never really embrace it completely, but it doesn't feel like this with Shiki? Dunno if it makes sense, but her knowledge just makes her seem incredibly aware, but still like a part of the world, and not out of place, like I think some people tend to make their SIs be.
Anyway! This is really cool! I like Shiki a lot and the changes you've made to the canon by leaving Minato alive and having Tsunade return to Konoha are definitely gonna make things interesting. Not to mention Obito. The link between Naruto and Shiki is interesting, too! I seriously can't wait for them to meet!
Hope this hasn't been abandoned and that you'll update soon!

Also can u write longer chapters. But if u don’t want to its fine, i just wanna read more cause i know it takes some people a long time to update.

Omg! Pls we need MORE! And stay safe:)

Now that everyone is in quarantine do you have time to update?

Why there isn't more of this story TT
A few things. It's interesting that Shiki didn't connect herself to the only Uzumaki in Konoha before Naruto, Kushina. It's also interesting that she didn't recognize Kyuubi or sealspace in her mindscape. Also, Zabuza can't be not named missing nin by Kiri because he participated in failed coup against Yagura. Btw, I think that Zabuza took in Haku before the coup because when Zabuza and Haku encountered Kimimaro Zabuza had Kiri flack jacket on him wasn't in a hurry to get away from Kirigakure so he probably hasn't defected yet or maybe he did. Who knows?
Is this story going to get continued? Should I follow it and wait?

1 Cant really say, there are a lot of ways it can go. 2 Another trip to her mindscape and/or hakus account of what happened after the business with the hunters. 3 Yes. Some how i doubt the hunters or the village will let them go. 4 Really cant say. I don't know enough people to say. 5 Looking forward to it. 6 That will be interesting.

Just read chapter 8. 1 Like her so far. 2 Siblings. 3 Yes. If i can be so bold i would give her Nuibari. I don't know why but i can see her fighting similar to hornet from hollow knight. The wire on the end can be very versatile it you use a little imagination, a lot you could get away with given some of the things they do in the manga and anime.

I would love to see a continuation of this or any of your other SI naruto fics! They are all awesome and I probably like this one the best. Although I did just finish reading this one, so my opinion may change depending on which one I'm currently reading. They're all so good! Thank you for sharing!

I really like this creative take on the twin-Uzumaki idea. I'm all here for Dad-buza having his heavy hitter team where they all have their awesome Kekkei Genkai as well as badass Kenjutsu training because I would expect nothing less from genin on Zabuza's Team.
Good work!

This is such a good story! I've never seen such a Naruto's twin fic and I must say it is glorious

I cant waaait! this fic is amazing

Not pushing for an update, but out of all your stories I've read so far, I really hope this is the one you update soon. It's a very good idea.

cherryvoid is a scammer
I think its really sad to create an account a just hate on someone that's writing for people for free

Okay that last scene is pure sibling interactions. If you aren't desperately blaming your sibling for stuff you did and getting away with it, are you truly related?

(Good stuffs Shiki is adorable and I'm looking forward to the possible reunion and how Minato living has changed things)

I'VE NEEVER READ SOMETHING UNIQUE AND BEAUTIFUL LIKE THIS ISTG I'LL SCREAM WHEN U UPDATE NEXT. 1. i think they WONT be caught :D will tell her or she'll meet naruto 3.i think they'll die, like they did originally shud meet kisame, deidara, sasori, basically kewl akatsuki members before they turned bad 5.i think that'd b muy epic 6.i think that'd b supremely epic