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The vindictive side of me adores this epilogue, it's well written and honestly exactly what I wanted to see. You're a very skilled author, keep up the good work.

Super great fanfic :D

This whole story was beautiful, the way you described her death and Sansa'a unconditional love was brilliant. I love the Blue Winter Rose addition and the flashbacks were so well done. Its a shame you did this in only two chapters, as you could have made a lot more of such a story, but you did so well I can't begrudge you on missing out the extra reading material :P

Fantastic work, brilliantly done!

Great ending

I do like the idea. It's very unique, and is handled fairly well I think. Overall I enjoyed it. I had a bit of a problem with envisioning Joffrey putting a woman on the throne before a son, as that's just not the Westeros way, but seeing how you wrote everything else so well I was certainly able to suspend my disbelief and get taken up in the story.

Lyanna is and interesting character for sure and I look forward to your epilogue.

How interesting, I love the idea you had of writing about Joffrey and Sansa's kids. The fact you chose to put his sadistic personality into a perfect princess is a fun idea and I like the fact you did this mainly from Sansa's point of view delving into the whole mother's love despite the monstrous nature of the child in question theme which GoT explores so well with Cersi and Joffrey.

I would love to see more of this :}

very interesting idea!
thanks

Pretty simple honestly, kinda like a palette swap up until the last 2 paragraphs, same scenarios, different characters. Honestly there's not enough here for me to judge it, my usual issue with one-shots. Now to get down to the nitty-gritty, this'll be harsh but it's just my opinion and you're entitled to write whatever you want. Ok, first of all I doubt the Male-ruled country of Westeros (where it seems the 3 jobs for women are religious work, whoring or marrying some lord) would be too accepting of a queen in power. Second of all, why is Joffrey less of a cunt? There's no reason behind it and as such I'm going from the scum of the fucking earth to this relatively chill guy with no segue. I probably went into this more seriously than I should have and because of that I can't take the characters seriously.

I love how this entire thing is just empowerment for your female OC, that's funny, honestly. If it was just a girl power thing then Sansa wouldn't be such a useless bitch. Maybe an epilogue where her brother comes back and destroys her in a war of succession? Because this Lyanna bitch deserves it.

Intresting au but the epilogue should be about the succesion war because that is exatctly what everybody would be waiting for to sit his children on the throne remember the dance of dragons had nearly the same beginning

Very good fan fiction. Keep the story going

This was amazing! Please continue! I would love to read more of this :) I absolutely adore Joffrey/Sansa fics and I've never read one about them having children together. I'm eager to read more :)

That was amazing. Keep going. I like Lyanna especially because she has a cold quality much like me, which is why I have come to like the hated Joffrey baratheon.

I love this!