That was really sweet, thank you!

AMAZING!

I really liked the stargazing part (the rest as well, just love watching stars myself), and totally get the whispering. Somehow you do that when you're outside at night... I'm curious to the rest of the story, so I'm off treading more!

I really like this...but I have a major ...issue? Irk? Bother-point? Its written in English...don't use the Japanese honourifics! personally, that bothers me when people do that! But that's just me...that aside, I really like this!

A wonderful end to a wonderful story! I loved the fact that you didn't do a cliche and have them 'together' by the end of the story (or end it with a kiss) - this way things still continue and it also gives you a set up for a possible sequel. Hey, anythings possible! Nice touch with the book as well. It's always been a dream for any secret author to be part of a book of their own. Overall, nicely done - you've done GaLe proud. :)

Looking forward to more from you! :D

Luna ;)

cheesy. but I LOVE it.

Huge smile on this person's face, even though you can't see it. School sucks, end of story. Ah, more fun facts, please write more. I haven't written any fairy tail stuff before, but after I finish the series I will. It's part of my requirements before writing fics. Read/Watch all of whatever the thing that I'm supposed to be writing a fic for in the way it was first introduced, then mess with it to death without fully contradicting anything.

Long and short of it: Love'd the fic.
Gi-hi!

Those cooky adults who you think will rat you out but just end up cheering you on. Gotta love 'em!
I think the italics could have been put on the This Time by now.

Fluuuuuufy!
Thank you for the translations, I was going to ask about that but thank you for clearing that up. I like the story, it's read just like the manga would be-fast paced with an eye for adventure. You don't need to go into super detail for this particular fandom, it has been explored thoroughly and with laughs all the way. You're doing just fine. No typos or particular instances of scentences where the meaning wasn't clear. It's like I've gone back into the manga along a side story that Hiro Mashima wrote for these two.

To sum it up: Keep up the good work!

Dragon Slayers, the mightiest of Earthland... that couldn't handle a cart pulled by a 4 year old.
LOVE IT!

All the yes. I need to get online so I can do everything. Also, I posted two nameless reviews earlier, just wanted to stake a claim on them. Love the story.

I'm starting to think that Lucy's just doing this to try and set Levy up with people. :D

Gihi!

really nice

I absolutely loved this story and the ending was completely perfect! :D