Shame this good story is dead. No payoff makes me sad.

Was brought to this fandom by another fic but it lacked the well written dialogue and backstory, was basically just a wank fest. Thank you for doing a villain (as if a fic this grey and detailed could be classified by single actions) fic justice and providing everything and more that said fic couldn't.

The character dynamics so far have been interesting and naruto having an agenda more than just having fun as a powerful being is intriguing especially with what looks like failure and pain in his quest to achieve it.

Ultimately the harem would keep me around but the development and detail would keep me happy. Sad to see and assume this fic is dead, it truly had potential. Thanks for the read!

Encore v

Really buddy really an exotic car Cmon definitely gotta go for the muscle not the exotics. Like Naruto driving a beautiful ‘67 cobra gt 500, or even a ‘68 super Bee. For shame... other than your choice in cars good fic so far

So of all the people he could have chosen to watch his house, he left an Anko clone? Is he stupid?

That could definitely be seen as her imagination going wild.

I have to say, I'm really interested in this crossover fic of yours.

I think in these crossovers, Naruto's either works with Kim or with Shego, but this one is unique for multiple reasons.
- 1) Naruto's basically god like.
- 2) He doesn't seem to work for either or, and has his own interests/goals in mind.
- 3) This fic is surprisingly dark, especially the way this chapter ended.
- 4) We're not actually sure what his goal is.

This fic so far has left me with questions that I hope to be answered soon. What does he plan on doing with Shego? What could have happened that have turned our favorite blonde hero so twisted? How much of a villain is he, given how he did save Tara from rape, and what's his actual endgame, especially with the army he's building? And who's that woman that's tormenting Shego?

Hoping for some more chapters soon!

the shadow clone idea was genus pure genius

yaoi genjustu omg I can't I'm literally dieing right now

Great job

update this story soon

dear writer please make more chapters

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

A slight correction on my earlier suggestion; the website I mentioned is 'Archive of Our Own'... a site where you can post any story your imagination can muster.

And yes, a most excellent chapter.

Thank you for your efforts.

Nice chapter... looking forward to this story getting deeper.

As to your worries about this fanfic getting taken down due to lemony goodness, may I recommend cross-posting this story on FicWad, or even on Archive Our Own (lemons more extreme than you can imagine get posted there). And, there are more than a few FFN authors doing that already.