This is a great fic but Francine and her telekinesis ability come out of nowhere. Is she from one of your other fanfics?

Very cool you doing more story of this but M rated version. I know it's going to be awesome!

Anyway, keep up the great writing!

In truth, I don't think that all this would've happened so soon. I mean, Stu dropped Dil on the head and, in a way, is at fault for Tommy being sick, so I don't see why they would get back together soon.

Although, it was your first time and you have indeed improved as a writer within that time :)

I just love how everything ended.

I apologize for not catching it, but what happened with Kira and Betty?

This chapter made me cry. Glad that Zack gave the twins another chance, too.

I wish the best for Tommy.

Poor baby :( His friends really don't understand what's going on. Sad that he and Chuckie had to be separated but Chuckie wasn't being fair. Then again, it's not their fault that they don't understand.

Wow, I feel really bad for Tommy in this chapter. I understand that Chuckie and Zack misunderstood, but the poor kid doesn't deserve to go through so much.

Whoa, looks like Zack doesn't really like Tommy right now - not at all. He seems to be filling up Tommy's role until Tommy's better.

I can't believe that Chuckie would agree to be anyone but Tommy's best friend so quickly. I thought their friendship was stronger than that :(

I feel so bad for Tommy :( I hope that he can go to Chuckie's party.

Yippee! Glad to hear that the little Rugrat has been doin' better.

I kind of thought that the adults were sort of OOC, but it was indeed your first time writing.

Oh no, the poor baby has a case of the Gray Plague :(

Angelica was right, it seems.

Uh oh. Considering the plot, I don't thing the poor thing will be able to survive the plague. I'll continue reviewing since this is really interesting so far and I'd like to see where it's going.

I hope so! They're babies, they need to be vaccinated against such a deadly disease.

Ahhh, I remeber those days, when I wrote crappy, and this, and that

Very interesting!

Loved it even if it did make me cry.