Awwwww...
Okay, now that I've reconstructed myself from the puddle of goo that story reduced me to, I think I can actually review. /Dang/, that was a good story. I love your characterizations, the dialogue, everything felt spot on. Beautiful job! :D Reading this made my day brighter.

I love this! Excellent representation of the relationship. Affection-starved Neal is my favorite Neal, and the fact that Peter picked up on it so quickly was awesome. Thanks for sharing!

oh nice!

Read this story a couple of times and realized I never reviewed... So heartwarming and well done. I love your take on the characters in the early stages of their tentative friendship.

Just gone through this kind and cute story of yours once more...and still loved the sweet, deep insight of Neal (and his complex, strong, vulnerable spirit) and in the last part of Peter (harsh and caring)! Your writing is amazing! Thanks!

Aww adorableness :)

I love it! You are brilliant! Absolutely amazing! You are an excellent writer! This story is amazing!

The line that stuck out the most was this 'Neal ran when things got bad. The trick was going to be to make him feel safe enough to run towards Peter, not away from the world.' It's absolutely what Peter tries to do with Neal in the show. He gets his vulnerability and understands he's scared but you're also right if he gives him an inch Neal will take a mile...I am loving your work...so well done. kind regards Heather

Soft needy Neal is just too cute for words

Love the mutual admiration

This story was adorable and I really like how you portrayed the minds of two amazing characters. Good job!

Loved it! It was a very cute moment between them.

This is all kinds of lovely. Thanks so much for posting it.

Lovely story, touching and amusing. Especially loved "Give him an inch..."

This was beautiful. Thank you.