I'm already in love with this story! I need to see what happens next!

This is quite an interesting story! :) Although the chapters are a bit too short.

I think it would be more good if you made the chapters a little longer. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter

Interesting thought, but you need to go maybe more in depth and have longer chapters. The second chapter is very choppy and short, and you could have described more about the setting and the atmosphere and things like that. Keep that in mind and keep writing.