Reviews for Sunny's New Story |
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Timeleaf chapter 20 . 6/5 When is the next chapter coming |
yellowfang chapter 13 . 6/29/2019 I read warriors and wings of fire. I LOVE THIS SO FAR! |
Hmmm chapter 1 . 10/5/2018 Well, in my opinion, I’m a but confused. Sunny is an only dragon (child) it said so. And even though this is fanfiction, I still don’t really understand WHY she would have a sister. |
Kanzah usman chapter 3 . 9/6/2018 Noòoooooooooooooo!There gone blaze burn blister who tride to kill my friends it must have been one of you not me kid of cours it wasn't me if I did kill your friends I have a deadly bar tail your mudwing Friend is all claws in his face of cours if it was one of you who took princess Tsunami and queen glory I'll tell mother |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/6/2018 Tsunami your tail is in the way sorry princess Tsunami your princess too of your tribe!Said sunny I miss starlight oh your so boring clay can you ever stop talking I don't think so?Glory were since in the Sea kingdom I didn't care now I do my mother queen coral was very mean to all of you nowwerein the kingdom of let's hear it from are princess sunny day you'll be gone sunny what happened To you sorry sandwings princesses don't take orders from other princesses from other tribe. |
Thorn chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 What mother you said she was dead!Sunny looked that her sister mother is she always like this?Yes ever since she gave up looking for you she was mad but as a few months later she going to be queen now your here you can be queen |
Anonymous chapter 2 . 7/31/2018 Really great story so far, although I haven’t read all of it yet. This is a really interesting side to Sunny that I never really thought of before. Do you know if any of this is canon? Or did you make the whole thing up? Can’t wait till the next chapter |
The Anonymouse2 chapter 1 . 4/28/2016 Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?! My mind is blown. Creative and original, though! Can't wait to see where this is going... |
Guest chapter 20 . 2/17/2016 Amazing! Please continue! |
Guest chapter 20 . 2/22/2015 AWESOME! but i want MORE! |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/22/2015 why does the strange dragon have orange spots?! just keep her golden! i mean, orange poka-dots would look strange on a dragon! |
familyguy1324 chapter 15 . 10/29/2014 why cant they just send Peril to go and rescue them herself I mean shes invincible hmmmmmmm I don't know maybe you added more people to make it interesting I mean it would be a boring fight if one dragon did a rescue misson |
Justkeepswimming chapter 14 . 10/29/2014 How is Starflight so casual that sunny can be dead I mean all he did was go ew ew ew ew for a bit then he talked he probably would have went straight to taking care of sunny (note not because hes is love but you know friend things) like I would think he would have the emotions like when clay got bitten by that viper (actually he really couldn't understand what was going on for being blind and what not but like he should be more worried because now he can see) and also why is so casual as well like he crys for like 1 minute because his mothers dead I swear he probably cares more about dusty then his own mother. Ps sorry for the negative comments but it still was a good chapter |
blades105 chapter 13 . 10/29/2014 really a speaker an a alarm system a key card... whats next a defensive system with machine guns what can fly automaticly? at least you made a painted piture in that last chapter I swear I thought it was going to be a photo but anyways maybe you should cut down on the technology a incy bit other than that I'ts a good story so far keep on typing :) |
hardtothinkofone chapter 13 . 10/29/2014 soooooooooo she just sends her straight away thats glory's first thought for some reason that dosent sound right but probaly im wrong. |