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I looove it! Hope you can continue this one day :)

GAH! ANTOHER cliffhanger in a great story! PLease update soon. The wait and suspense will kill me.

Ah this one seems really good. Maybe you'll finish it one day?

I swear that last line made me think of the song "got 99 problems but a bitch ain't one" except that mini bitch Sakura is still kinda a problem. Lol.

I need it sweet Jesus, I need it. And I'm all for a secret smart naruto, he's always sassy.

Rip kakashi. Cause of death: nosebleed.

I'm pretty sure a lot of people have already said this, but I just can't resist. I got ninety nine problems, but saku-bitch ain't one!

*fangirl screech* YES! I hope you come back to this, I can't with all you're gloriousness, and I've only read the first chapter!

Are you going to continue this story? I would like to see it's progression, your writing is good and idea is interesting. Please pick this up or say if it is dropped.

Naruto & Sasuke's interactions are done really well in this story! Itachi being around instead of a missing-nin for Sasuke to obsess over might have something to do with that...
PLEASE make Sakura grow up during the Chunin Exams! I don't want Sasuke to hate her forever. *puppy-dog eyes*

*snickers throughout reading the Chapter*
Atta boy, Naruto!

LOVE it from start to finish! A perfect mix of canon & originality! *grins*
I'm glad Sasuke called Sakura out on her hypocrisy; it's NOT bashing, since she actually is that horrible in the manga & TV show until the Chuunin Exams literally knock a tiny bit of sense into her (& even then it takes 2 years of Tsudane's training for her to become the badass she is in Shippuden).

This Chapter is very well-written!
Heck, I even understand Sasuke's thought process (or maybe that's just my weirdness)...