Dumb just turn naruto to their watchdog instead

Sorry to say you have no class swearing really I hate say but keep your character swearing I don't see this fanfic with much hope

Shittiest story I have ever heard. Do you know naruto can't get drunk. And that he is a ninja who can't be out smarted by an assasin. He is being a slave for sirechs when he had power to crush him. Your story wasted my night.

this is a shit story

Saw that dumb edgelord torture scene and realized this story has no hope. This entire thing reads like it was written by a 15 year old who desperately wants people to think he's cool and mature.

I can understand Naruto making a mistake but this mistake seems stupid. You expect me to believe he's some big badass that you build him up as when you have him making such a rookie move as getting drunk when he's on guard duty? Come on give me a break. Could you have come up with a more contrived plot detail? You couldn't have made it more interesting like he starts fighting a smaller group of assassins and realizing too late that they were just the distraction and then Bael gets assassinated because he didn't take that into account? That seems more realistic to me.

Dude Sasuke redeemed himself, you people seriously need to get off your hate boner for him.

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Wow, very interesting fanfic please continue it

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Can't wait to see what happens next

great chapter!

This is the WORST Naruto-DxD crossover on this site. If you're reading this review, I suggest you get out while you can or you will find yourself raging, and laughing that this story is an attempt at a realistic Naruto who makes mistakes 'LEARNS' from those mistakes, and then, wait for it... MAKE THE SAME MISTAKES OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN WITHOUT EVER LEARNING FROM THEM!

So, in conclusion do not read this 'story'. :)

OK, you're ACTING like you want to write a realistic fic, but to me it seem pretty obvious that you're basically bashing Naruto.

I love this so much and if I don't have another chapter we will have problems...can't wait for the next one