Reviews for Shomakhâl
Mysteryfan17 chapter 25 . 9h
I was at work and for some odd reason, I flashed to this story but had them in Mirkwood and a certain Elf king decided to try and sway Bilbo away from the Dwarves by decking him out in an Elvish style... including his hair. The reaction was a lot of swears and threats before Bilbo suggested that, because he had done Bilbo's hair and thought it was no big deal, Gloin should be allowed to do Legolas' hair, to make it fair. My imagination (and my lunch break) ended on Legolas' face in reaction to hearing Gloin go "Well, sit here on the floor so we can get started."
Guest chapter 45 . 6/4
Anyone here in 2020 ;-;
Gosh I really hope to see this finished. It’s one of the best fics I’ve ever read. The lore is so deep and the relationships seem so natural and all of the characterss are so well written and have amazing interactions-
Dang. I can’t wait to see more.
Gracie chapter 45 . 11/24/2019
What happened to the 46th chapter being nearly done?:(
arlena.ferrell chapter 45 . 11/5/2019
Omg I read this in one day and I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2019
Hi! This is the first result when I searched "dwarves find out bilbos age"!

Good job. Getting first on google is quiet a feet!
Procrastinatingismyforte chapter 45 . 10/6/2019
I have read this story twice before and this is my third time reading it now. And may I just say; I absolutely adore this story. Your plot is impeccable, your character portrayal is top quality and you have flung my emotions to left and right with making me cry in sorrow for bilbo to cackling like a witch at the dwarves escapades. My hat goes off to you!
00Chup chapter 45 . 3/6/2019
I'm really enjoying this story, it's so very cute! Thank you for sharing x
Penelope Valentine chapter 45 . 12/27/2018
This is awesome and amazing! Thank you for writing it!
Glóin gets overlooked a lot, and it’s really nice to see him take centre stage. I love what you’ve done with his character, and his relationship with Bilbo is just lovely! It also totally makes sense that you de-aged Bilbo - I don’t see 50 year old Bilbo, who is a bit more established in his adultiness, putting up with any of this!
Óin is also fabulous, and his relationship with Glóin is hilarious!
All in all, this is just a fantastic piece of fiction. I’m a sucker for found family, and I haven’t seen it in this form within the Hobbit fandom before - usually it’s Bilbo and all the Dwarves, or the Durins, or the Fundins, I’ve never seen it with Bilbo and Glóin and Óin specifically before. It’s super original and totally awesome.
I love this, and it’s totally cheered me up while I’ve been in my sick bed. Thank you again for writing it and sharing it with us!
Child of Dreams chapter 42 . 10/8/2018
Line of Durin uses silver beads, not gold.
Child of Dreams chapter 35 . 10/8/2018
But Hobbits can't swim!
Child of Dreams chapter 3 . 10/8/2018
Dragonfire's hotter.
Cn chapter 45 . 6/28/2018
Loved every minute of reading this!
Guest chapter 45 . 9/20/2017
Love it! Can't wait for the next update
Guest chapter 45 . 8/26/2017
I love this story
Guest chapter 45 . 8/9/2017
Update please I love this story
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