Hi!
I absolutely love the world you just created and how could anyone dislike a winged Ichi? I think it’s absolutely perfect how even being a submissive, Ichi don’t act fully as one, he’s really well balanced and Grimm too. He’s being helpful and protective but doesn’t loose his characteristic attitude. This story doesn’t have one thing I dislike, with it’s perfect good ending :)
Bye bye

nice

Love it!

aww now they are going to have little babies named nel!

Lovely!
So glad I found your account! :-)

This was an awesome idea and a great story!

That was soo damn great. Ah sorry for cursing. But, really. I love it so much. Please make more?

By: KaSaHa

Ahhh! Loved it!

I absolutely adore this story. It was well written and a pleasure to read. It might've been fun for an epilogue chapter to be written where Grimmjow meets Ichigo's fathers. Just something short and fun with the usual death threats thrown in XD Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of creativity.

I love this story! It's so unique too!

really good story wished it was longer but very good details in most parts thanks you for a good story

I absolutely loved it.
i really enjoyed your writing style and even more the story. I feel that you ended it perfectly! Thank you gor such a wonderful story. (:

This story was simply lovely! Not to much drama or anything depressing, perfect in my opinion! Loved it:)

OMG I loved it! I truly wish that there was more to the story!

I enjoyed this immensely, the progression of their relationship felt very well paced and organic. Your writing, in my opinion, was appropriately descriptive for this fantasy/romance mixed novella, though maybe a little florid in some parts. I also think you did a good job in the PoV switches, I was never confused who the speaker was because their voices were distinct.

Thank you for sharing this fic with us!

And as a side note, as the writer you are entitled to updating whenever you're able and with update at whatever length you're able. That being said, i hope you your choice to make chapter 2 significantly longer was not influenced by any reviews as asking for longer updates. As readers, we always want more faster, but personally i hold a lot of respect for fanfic writers, who do this on their own time at no expense or compensation, so please don't demur in the future about shorter updates. :)