Reviews for A Tale of Two Swans
Guest chapter 22 . 11/10/2014
I'm conflicted. I'm sad that it's over, happy that they got a happy ending and sad that it was at the expence of SB Emma and EF Regina. At least part of them wasn't lost in the end.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Beautiful but really did you have to include death it almost made me cry which is kind of hard to do
Rain Addict CM chapter 22 . 11/11/2014
I was a bit sad two lose the other halves, but then I just went and visited Rumples vault :)
Rain Addict CM chapter 18 . 11/11/2014
As of chapter 18, your Charmings make me wanna like them! Unlike the almost hatred I have for the show... Cute chapter :) Henry's obsession with babysitting himself is a bit odd but funny lol. They really need to come up with a nickname for lil Henry.
Rain Addict CM chapter 16 . 11/11/2014
I like where your mind took that! Cause chapter 16 had me giggling and blushing. Off to read the rest!
Guest chapter 21 . 11/9/2014
A happy ending, of sorts I suppose. I would have preferred them all to get that chance. It just feels that SB Emma and EF Regina got tossed away and replaced and everyone was happy about it. Regina didn't even want Emma to get the other ones memories back and vice versa. I loved the story up until the last two chapters.
Guest chapter 20 . 11/9/2014
Ehhh. You killed them? Having their memories is not the same at all. They still died and got their happy endings snuffed out. And why is Henry not upset at all about it? And suddenly EF Emma and SB Regina are true loves? Not liking this development all that much.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/9/2014
Now I'm worried too.
Guest chapter 17 . 11/9/2014
A trip to Boston and Regina is having a bad feeling. I hope it's not too bad. I like the idea of them settling in Boston eventually.
SBNYC09 chapter 22 . 11/10/2014
Great story! Loved it!
Guest chapter 16 . 11/8/2014
Umm... Hot!... That was hot... Gotta agree with Emma. They're going to run out of hot water :)
barnabus67 chapter 22 . 11/9/2014
I for one am glad you included the memories. While EF Emma fell in love initially with SB Regina, SB Regina fell in love with SB Emma who experience different life. That life made her who she was. I do like the fact that EF Emma get to experience being loved by Snow and David. I wonder if little Henry will grow to be different from the other..I guess Regina would have the advantage there!
ajm85 chapter 20 . 11/8/2014
you never said it was a tragedy or put warnings for character deaths:( why kill them off, it won't be the same now. i don't see it working if they both take on the memories because neither of them will be with their regina or emma. i will miss sb emma as she gave both regina's the ability to love again and a brief chance at happiness. i will also miss the queen and her big big love filled heart all she wanted was a chance at a happy ending and true love. i hope sb regina and little emma find their happy ending and keep their partners memories alive.
i think they should stay them and try to take on their counter parts memories as well and live as both. (like the curse)
p.s. don't like this story no more:( so so sad;;
LauratheChef chapter 20 . 11/8/2014
Why did you kill off older Emma and the Queen? considering there are now two Henrys what now?
barnabus67 chapter 16 . 11/8/2014
speechless
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