You wrote the characters exactly as they were on the show. You're brilliant!

So glad you have updated! Aww it's so sad that Amy went through that, but I'm glad she told miles!

Aww poor Amy. Nicely written and the length of the chapter doesn't bother imho

Another great chapter. Very nicely written, really didn't expect that it would have been her own brother that caused those scars. I expected it to be a aggressive husband or a man who couldn't keep his hands to himself. So nice suprise (not for Amy of course).. Anyway, hope you update more!

Lovely chapter, am glad you updated. I really like this story, even is this chapter is very short (but I understand that you're busy, so I'm glad you even updated). Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Oh, God! What happened to her? You can't stop now, we need to know. Please do not make the other twin a monster.

love this story line, can't wait for you to update!

Another lovely chapter. Am really curious how she got the burn scars on her arm and why she was screaming for Joey. Anyway, update soon :)

oooh, do i detect a love struck miles? what would it be? Milelia? Milia? Amiles? looking forward to the next chapter!

Oooh yes, please write more - I love Miles and I want so badly for him to have a happy ending

Nice start! Tom's past seems intriguing and I love Miles/Kitty friendship. Nice to see sthg good potentially in the store for our lovely Miles! Want more!

great stuff! Tom's past seems intriguing... and happy to see sthg good potentially happen to the lovely Miles.

V intrigued... please continue!

Really like this. Please go on, can't wait for the next chapter. Miles deserves to have a story too! He is a good guy.

Oh, haha this is rather marvellous (to use the words of Miles). And the girl being Tom's sister is even more hilarious. Very nice chapter, hopefully you can update soon :)