I have nearly finished them all I started from your first and nearing the last. Thank you very much for a good read

This was so lovely! And would have been a perfect substitute for the actual episode (although maybe wouldn't have been allowed to be shown on tv) ;)

It was good to see Jane and Lisbon both acknowledging their parts in the chain of events that led to this predicament. Glad that things are resolved and Lisbon can go in to this relationship with a clear conscience. I enjoyed this little story. Thanks for sharing it.

Loved the punch! But loved Jane's reaction even more. "She still loves me,". :-D
I like how you brought out the passion and the pent up emotions they've kept hidden all these years. This was a good read.

So glad u stopped them just as Teresa hears her phone. I didnt think shed jump from one man to the next without talking first to Marcus. Well done!
Sugar

Loved this story this should of also happened in the episode.. I loved the airport scene but this would have been a bonus. love your writing. :)

Beautiful, Just Sooooooo beautiful

What an amazing take on what could have happened. I loved every word. As great as Blue Bird was, this would have been amazing to see. Just perfect.

Wow, hot chapter. ;) You deserve all the chocolate. Also enjoyed the conversation between Jane and Lisbon. Looking forward to the next installment!

wow! that piece was perfect!
the dinner, the dance, the walk on the beach, the fight and then their love making OMG! wonderful !
great job on it really! :3

Oh, I wished I could you give lots of chocolate... unfortunately a review'll have to do :) It's a shame that I'm through with reading so fast. I ever love your romantic, touching fics. They always have a good share of suspense, erotic and humor. However, it brings me joy that I can't find any indication in the chapter heading that it's complete. So can we look forward to another chapter, can't we? Please?
Last year, I read your season 3 AU series which I found incredible good. Regrettfully I didn't leave reviews, I'm sorry about that. So please, take this little origami frog: Hiatus will take sooo long... so I guess I'll indulge myself by rereading this treasure plus the sequels and leave worthy reviews.

Mmhm, enjoyed very much. I'm in a hurry to get to ch2 though, since it's there already and I'm thirstliy for it. So now I absolutely have to drink... Oh, ad interim... thank you :)

Holy crap! As per usual, you have provided us with something wonderful!

Love your take on the seduction. Your are a true wordsmith and never fail to dazzle me with talent. Thank you for sharing.

Really loved this tag, it made me smile, felt so happy. Thanks. Loved his final plea to her to finish him. And that she finally said the words!