I think we need to see more of Viktor's past. Such as, his relationship with his parents and friends, does he like the rest of his family? Does he have many friends? Hope this helped!

Did someone adopt this story and if they did could u plzz tell who

Nice and sweet story.

This was so good, a traditionally raised Harry but one who wants to do more and with him by her side, she'll be amazing! I love all the respectful courting they did even before it was all official, some old values are good.

Also nice to see something where the different classes and opinions of wizard/witch society is clear to see and not just sloshed together.

Aww so sad it is the end.

Admittedly, I've only ever had two crushes. One on a male in 7th grade, who I believe I only liked because he was taller then me and outgoing. And a girl in my 8th year, we road the bus together and I thought she was really nice and cute. She was rather outgoing as well.

This is really SWEET

A shame that your muse bought tickets for outer Mongolia! I was wondering a little about the "Girl-who-lived" who didn't have Voldie coming after her and that she wasn't rangled into the tournament. But I went with it and found it quite delightful. Would have liked a synopsis of what you thought was going to happen, but - ah well.

Great job

Aww. Great chapter.

I LOVE IT

this is so sweet. would love to see a sequel

She forgot about 'V'oldemort.

It ended a bit suddenly, but was nice.

It is always strange to read a female Harry Potter, but usually, the females are a lot smarter than the male!