While I understand why that was put in, I dont like it.

That ending made me laugh

Funny how thats what happening in the end of season 2

And the happy family of !Soul Sucking Fiends From Hell! lived happily ever after. ... ... ...This is a hilarious ending! Oh! There was so much drama!
Thanks for the story. It was really good. You are a talented writer. Thank you for sharing your story with us all.

NOPE, I don't like this, I don't like this at all. Things were doing so damn well, why did he face to show up?

Um I’m so far in the middle of chapter 1 and I wanna know how Harry can love Voldemort it makes no sense whatsoever Voldemort is firstly hideous and second he can’t love anyone anymore remember, I am so confused!

Wau ni pensar que dejo a Tom por ese demonio que horrible quien podría vivir con alguien que ya te traiciono y con hijo además de que te causara la muerte y te traicioonara no entiendo y la verdad creo que fue innecesario esas traiciones tan grandes mira que verlo sufrir de lejos a tu paewja embarazada y encima engañarlo con el enemigo? La verdad me decepciono el personaje de Harry al final yo que él me voy con Tom y vuelvo después por Ciel y se acabo, este final decepciona porque la historia estaba hermoso pero cuando lo complicas demasiado ya parece novela mexicana

Screw first person pov

eine der besten geschichten die ich je in diesem fandom gelesen habe. lg hayne

Oh, I didn't like the end so much (Sebastian as you have portrayed him would never abandoned his mate- he waited for him too long) But the idea is nice, and I especially enjoyed sebastian trying to woo Harry and their love. So thank you for your hard work.

This is a brilliant story that I've thoroughly enjoyed reading.

this was super wow! it makes me fall in love! I fall in love whole story, you made me crazy and I ridley also charm this end! I like it! I wrote super!

I bawled my eyes out reading this... dear lords that is not okay or fair that I read this on my cycle- it always makes me 10 times more emotional...

Love the fix though

*excited squealing* This was so awesome! Though I kind of wish Sebastian had been punished a bit more. *scowls* Still, so win!

This was good. damn. Perfect job! The angst was in point and the ending lovely! You mentioned a sequel and an altenative ending, uh, is that in your mind still?