I must admit that seeing that it was a story of OC x canon character had no hope that it was even funny, but wow, you surprised me.
Your story is too good! I hope you continue it!

Wow it's been nearly a year since you last updated this, and I just found this now hahahaha XD I'm rather enjoying this story and do hope that you don't give up on It, it pretty funny and I love the characters interactions, can't wait for more.

Ya gonna update or what?

Uhm does Spectra get pair with anyone's?

Is Volt dead? Damn it.

What happened to the other chapters?

I really like it pls continue and update soon p.s. I think both spectra and masquerade are both hot and I like lunas personality

All right reviewing time!
So what I didnt like was Spectra wasting so much time with names.
Names are the least important things, Spectra didnt know of they were part of the brawlers he recieved masquerades, if he doesnt know Masquerade is part pf the brawlers despite A. Being hydranoid's former brawler and B. the brawlers are fairly well known meaning Masky would be decently known in connection to them.
But thats not the point, whats Spectra after here? It seems like he wanted brawlers okay hes got two possible brawlers, name? Wont give him it then he should respond by yanking on their chains or forcing them to reveal it within that chapter. Him attacking Masquerade to get Luna to reveal hers in a chapter so far away from when the question was first asked falls out of sync.
It shouldve gone names, do what he must to get names, and then move on to whats important. Either leaving them (cause their for ransom), torturing them further (for like information on the brawlers and such).
Another thing that irked me was you had Spectra say 'who are you his mother/girlfriend." First off no, no dont do that. By tacking on two tetms you just kinda killed the joke there. Because shes too young to be his mother and the girlfriend jab couldve been delivered better.
Like 'The great Masquerade has to have his little girlfriend defend him? How pathetic.' Or 'I didnt realize he was so pathetic he needs his girlfriend to defend him.'
Or something like that. The mother part was unnecesary and usually a mother jab is delivered if say Luna was acting overbearing to Masquerade who'd respond with 'who are you my mother?'.
Also the escape was way too easy and Masquerade was sitting on that DT for too long to not have just whipped it out and gotten out of there much earlier.
So heres my advice.
1. Have Spectra have a reason for wanting them there, ransom, information, to keep them out of his way, experimentation etc just so theres something happening while they're captured.
2. Slow down the relationship, i mean when you had Masky tortured it was specifically to get to Luna, it wouldve been better if Masquerade had been witholding info spectra wanted, spectra tried beating him up to get it and then Luna couldnt take watching him get beaten and pleaded bordbrain to stop. That way its more meaningful otherwise every character is trying to shove this pairing down our throats when they're not even paired together yet .
3. Make the escape more than just Masky had the DT in his pocket all along and forgot about it or something. I mean theres options here. Playing dead, the guards unshackle one of them to get them checked whoever played dead (or sick) tricks them and catches them off guard steal the keys and they make a run for it. Just no whipping out the DT and have them escape its too cheap too easy.
4. Personality. I have no idea what this girl feels or thinks. Okay she thinks she hates masky but then she also likes masky. Show dont tell. If Luna isnt fond pf Masquerade have her not be fond of him. Have her glare at him, not talk to him, ignore him, all i get is protests no we dont like each other oh but we'll save each other than question why and no no no no No.
First off repetitive. Dont have Masky save Luna then have Luna go all 'why did you save me?' And then reverse it with Luna saving Masky and masky go all 'why did you save me?' Just... No. More personality! Masky would spit in Spectra's face. Hed mock birdbrain every second, he wpuldnt roll over for some girl he doesnt really care about, personality. Thats what this story really needs.

But you do have a good idea. Just fix the things i mentioned above and itll come out so much better.

So they just teleported out of there, UPDATE!

Would Luna really hurt me if I didn't review? I am used to cliff hangers now thanks to YouTube.

I watched the first few episodes of bakugon, but it might take me a while to get caught up. The invention grabbed the wrong people then.

I don't know what bakugan is, but this is a great first chapter.