This was adorable. :)

How the prophecy and the sword made their way to the icy land was brilliant!

Im linking this so much!

this cant get any cuter

Oh my! What an amazing story! Brava Ma Cherie! I absolutely love WakaXAmaterasu. Everything tied in together very well. I love how you even came up with an origin for Cutone. Wonderful!

wait... this was okay but you forgot about the prophecy ; ; ...! the prophecy about nagi!

Great way to end the story! I really enjoy reading the trial that Waka had to do to join the Celestial Knights, the action in it left my heart racing. Poor Waka, being reminded of the time when his childhood home was being attacked. The scene in the ark after it landed in Nippon was bone-chilling with all the bodies of the killed Celestials floating on the water's surface. So Waka isn't a very good swimmer. That could be a very good reason why his clone, Kurow, can't swim. Itegami's ice sword was Kutone, MIND-BLOWN! He also prophesied Issun's birth and Kutone's prophecy, I didn't see that coming. I enjoyed reading your story and I'm happy that it ended well :)

Beautiful T-T I almost cried when Waka woke up in the middle of the lake (I dont remember the name of it XDDD)

Good end but sorta sad too

i was the guest below that vvv
anyways thanks for updating! i had almost lost my muse for okami but then i read this again and i gotta say i still got it lmao! though im more obsessed with hetalia now, i really enjoyed every single chapter and plenty of feels were felt.

Wow this story is amazing! Please please please keep writing more! This is by far my favourite okami story and I cannot wait until the next chapter! The story style is great and so is everything else about it! :-) again, please keep writing! hope to read the next chapter soon!

PLEASE UPDATE THIS LIKE SRSLY.

But for real, I've been looking for a story like this one forever. All the other stories have different ideas of their past and everything, but this one comes closest to how I imagined it! Except, I would've thought her hair would be the brush lol. I really wish there was more to read T-T AMMYXWAKA R SO CUTE LIKE BUT LITTLE WAKA SPEAKING FRENCH? THIS IS YOU BLOWING MY MIND-BOOM. DEAD.

Eeeee so you did get the second chappy up, fwiend! - Also don't rush when writing. Rushing your works is terrible x-q I would know XD but anywho it's nice to see a new chapter a week!
Awww I love this story. It seems to have some angst hidden too huh cx Waka is hot. kid!Waka is adorable. Amaterasu is awesome; as awesome as this story. Which is an awesome the level of OVER 9,000! *shoots around aimlessly at the air*

Waka is so cute at the end here! And poor kid...

Oh so this story is going to be about Waka and Amaterasu's past relationship, and everything like 100 years ago. Nice! Good idea! Thumbs up on this one, I can't wait to read more!