Reviews for Fate Fell Short
some place chapter 1 . 6/3
I loved this when I first read it and I still do. ;)
JillianEmily chapter 1 . 5/19
This was posted about six years ago and I’m just now finding it! I’ve read through most of your fics years ago but apparently I never read this one. There were apparently more chapters but this chapter alone is actually AMAZING and like how do you even write one chapter so flawlessly? Also, I’m really drawn to the title of this for some reason. Just an overall thank you for all the fics you’ve written, and I have no idea if you’ll ever see this because it was written so long ago, but regardless, this one chapter alone was so well written! Never stop shining, girly!
BoysLikeGirls13 chapter 1 . 5/18
okay i need to know what happens next.

and I know writing should be all about fun and I know the feeling of being pressured to update, hence why I don't do it currently either. but I really like this start and I hope that someday you will upload again and make me very happy.

this story is amazing and so well written. I like it very much, just like your style. you have me hooked and I hope someday I'll get to read more.

but take your time. this should be fun and not because people pressure you into something. you're doing great. :D
Pharthrax chapter 1 . 11/27/2019
Damn, that A/N screamed "fed up". Sorry you had to deal with that garbage, the internet can be not a fun place sometimes, because people feel safe with a screen between them and the other person. I really enjoyed this, Annabeth and Thalia's interactions were great for best friends, and I'm glad Percy asked permission like six times when Annabeth was high. I had a good time reading, I hope my grammar isn't atrocious, and thanks for posting and, especially not putting up with bullshit comments.
guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2019
Oh please just upload this great story again
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2019
Just so you know, you right fanfuckingtastic fanfiction
Mmp chapter 1 . 8/2/2019
I remember reading this story back when you where updating and I always check periodically just to see if you have! I just wanted to say you are a captivating writer and the story I was so good and I Hope negative reviewers didn’t stop your love for writing! Anyways still love this story (even the little part still posted!)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2019
this was amazing! I wish you wrote more )': But if you were getting hate reviews, I wouldnt have blamed you ( I just spelt that wrong *facepalm*
Cocoarhymes chapter 1 . 1/28/2019
Loved the story!
Priya chapter 1 . 1/2/2019
You go girl!
NotAShittyReview chapter 1 . 9/12/2018
Hello to you! I’m sorry to hear that people have trashed your story- it was good, don’t let them bother you. I liked how you made Annabeth be embarrassed of herself and let peer pressure take over her, instead of Annabeth just regretting even coming without giving us readers a decent reason as to why she came to that party. I couldn’t actually find any faults with it, so this review (if you even see it) would be a waste of our time. Congratulations on standing up to those bullies, and I hope they go shove their bad grammar up their asses.

Hope You Have A Nice Day,
A Random Person.
Shauna Kullden chapter 1 . 6/18/2018
Did I already review on this logged in?
I kinda think I did... Hehe eh well.
I really really like this fic! Read it thrice already ;)
Hope you update soon, and add another chapter! Can't wait for the rest of the story!
:D
Love the cute way Annabeth and Percy interacted.
Call me Indecisive chapter 1 . 6/10/2018
I really like this !
:D
Always loved the one-night-stands -turned-love stories. Especially with Percy(333) and Annabeth, you even gotta ask?
Please do upload another chapter... really wanna see this unfold into a story.
Nameless chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
Good chapter. I have not read this earlier, I don't know about the flames but, love the attitude ;)
Kenyatta.harmon16 chapter 1 . 4/26/2018
I read this story before where did all the other chapters go
There we like 30
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