This was super cute. I'm a slow burn person so it moved a little fast for me, but still. Major kudos!

Hahah, I had so much fun reading this, especially looking into Thorin's head :) The thickheaded, stubborn and idiotic dwarf that we all love. THANKS for another great story! Love your work :)

Aww this was so cute and I loved it.

hello,

thanks you for this story.
all the best

Good.

Would you mind if I make a translation of this fic to Spanish and wattpad?

Dawwww! Tooo CUTE! LOL Yup, Thorin is nothing if not hardheaded. XD Stubborn dwarf.

Did you HAVE to do the smut? Otherwise, this story was quite adorable. Still, I would have preferred if you'd kept it rather innocent.

So here I am, pages into the Hobbit archive looking for a nice Bilbo/Thorin story to read (so few are peaking my interest) when I finally find one I might read. It's multi chapter though and some time around 5am so I decide to check the reviews, see if it's worth staying up a little later for. Then the username catches my eye. I'm sure I've seen it before. And lo-and-behold, upon investigating, I see why. I've read some of your work before, in the FFXII archive :) That swayed my decision for certain and I'm glad for it. I very much enjoyed reading this, most especially Fili and Kili's mischieviousness/Thorin's stubbornness. Mayhaps later in the day (when I've actually bothered to sleep) I'll have a read of some more of your work :) The only non-positive thing I could think to say on this is your overuse of the words 'I suppose'. It's mostly in the first chapter and doesn't cause much issue but it was enough to notice. It's something I'm guilty of myself so I thought I should point it out. Now, tis 7am so I think that sleep thing is in order. Goodnight :)
Ari x

Aww. I loved it. I wish it were a longer story because I didn't want it to end. Very endearing :)

THIS WAS SO CUTE! Adorable! Kili and Fili were too funny! Your characters were loyal to the ones in the book and movies not to mention how amazingly and expertly this was written. Not only, in my opinion a beautiful piece of literature, but also adorable and just amazing. I laughed I cried

Beautiful! :))))) Uggh never thought about this pairing going so well together…before. . This was really great.

And then he dies.

*pouts* It's over? I thoroughly enjoyed this little fic, I really hope you continue to write for this pairing and fandom! The smut scene was super sweet, and I loved it :) Thank you for writing this.

I liked all of the different points of view, and you handled them each brilliantly. Gandalf is as wise as always, and I particularly loved the line you used, "Rock headed, yes. Rock hearted? I'm not so sure." That was literally one of the best comparisons for Thorin's personality I've come across. I also really enjoyed Bilbo stripping himself of propriety and joining the Dwarves in the bathing- since too often he is characterized as a simpering thing, so caught up in decency. I can't wait to delve more into this story :3