This was awing, thank you :)

Hey
first of all, I really liked it! It was pretty good, especially since it is your first story. It was more of a scene than a story, but that is a good place to start. Your english is fine, but if you check it another time you could correct some minor mistakes like misspelling blanket.
The only thing I'm not really fond of is the title, but that's just an opinion. Something with cold or hiding is more methaphorical and vague, but also more general. It keeps the story more surprising.
good luck with your writing!

I actually just love this. You didn't over use the nickname princess, and I find things so much more intimate the these words are spoken.

It was really sweet, and i loved it. keeping writing them like this. #CLELLAMY start the name mash3

This was perfect. I can imagine them needing a break and being able to show their vulnerable sides to each other. You did this piece so well.