Wow great story! I loved how you brought Kovu into the pride lands to grow up! Wish the movie was similar to this!

This was a great story. I always loved the Kovu x Kiara relationship in the sequel, but I like the idea of them being like siblings too. Your portrayal of Simba beats how jerky he was in the movie..was so peeved at him there and felt so sad for Kovu being exiled.

This story was so awesome and it was so very greatly written! I loved everything about the story.

I've got to say i love this fanfic. i can't help but compare it to where there's life there's hope, and i would argue this is actually better. It's not Kovu's action, but Simba's action that causes Kovu to go over to the Pridelanders, which leaves him with much more of an arc to go through. Also he's a lot less apologetic about his outsider ways, which i find to be more realistic and creates a more interesting conflict. love the story, can't wait to finish it.

I LOVE

Seriously this is probably one of the most pathetic fanfics ever, I mean really why did you have to make Kopa die and on top of that Kiara and Kovu don't have Cubs so you've basically taken out the best scenes and added in the worse, like come on they're fricking teenagers for God sake what the hell is wrong with you people for doing that and Kotani shipping cousins for God sake?!

Kovu was triggered by his mother's deal in the chapter: darkness , if I was him in that situation I wouldn't have taken it either but again if I was him I would have tucked my legs and pushed on nuka's stomach

zira is a cruel mom if I was kovu in that situation that must have been painful to wacth

Good story :D)

Good story!

Well, you've done it again, I really enjoyed the read. The grammar is very good, except from one misplaced speech mark but we're all human. 9.975/10, I would also recommend to a friend.

Wonderful story!

Your ending was truly unexpected and came to a bit of a confused shock, but it had me hooked on reading through to the very end. Your adding of cubs may had been a little typical, considering how many OC's are out there, but they way you described them hardly gave any feel of a Mary Sue at all. Your story was well thought out, descriptive, and I'm glad the lot was different from what you expect from alternate timelines. Congratulations on finishing your story and I look forward for what you have planned next.

This was a good way to end :)

Wow.
That was a good read
Ive read since the start of the series, and I've not regretted it.

This fandom seems quiet of late, but even so, this was an enjoyable read. I am glad it had a nice conclusion.
While the story purports to be. About Kovu, it can just as easily be said to be about Vitani.
The differences between the two characters were Stark.
A nice touch, was illustrating Simba's reluctance to allow the outlanders return - almost fearing Vitani's power.

In all, a great story I enjoyed immensely. Well done.