dude i ll say its good but man its crappy. oh god,its to gay and i don't like it. your a great writer and all but this is just a no-no for me , i don't know its because u did it late but yeah its not before you cuss me for this review, i ll just like to say its my opinion and i just like to voice it out, you know? and i m very sorry if i m being ass about it but i don't care, i also wanted to say that haters gonna hate ,right? once again very sorry. and one more thing i don't have an account, I'm just surfing the internet and stumble upon this. so yeah its a one time thing and i wont do this again. Ok i admit, it's a dare and i lost and i need to type it ,so pls forgive me? i am really sorry,

Absoultely amazing! :'). I love your writing style and you did a good job! :D Well done x.

"glances between you two like you're both equally bad decisions in Minesweeper"

OH.

MAN.

ALSO WHY AM I FINDING THESE NOW (I mean, okay, it works out 'cos I'm on an ItaSaku bender and I love your characterizations and loooooooove)

(And thank you ;heart; I try to be rad :)))) )

PERFECTION

Oh My God this is awesome! I love it! Please accept my proclomation of undying lurve! 3

I love this. Itachi is... awkward and nervous and it's so nice and refreshing! And I loved how it was written. It reminded me of something like a train of thought. Just everything that runs through your mind, quick and raw, and you can't stop any of it. Cute, clumsy, realistic and poetic :)

cute

Aww...this is cute! I think you did pretty well at making a very realistic-like story around those two...and awkward Itachi is just plain cute! Good job!