Reviews for The Laughing Master |
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Fido123a chapter 18 . 3/9/2018 Well, it looks like the Laughing Magician will be full filling his familial duty (as humanity's defense against God's) in the next war. I think their Synchronicity trait is technically more about bending fate/destiny/luck to their will... whether conscious or not. Kinda explains why he can arguably be considered smarter than Batman. |
Guest chapter 18 . 10/29/2017 Damn boy, nice fic. The only point of contention is that final Servant battle. You left that thing too up in the air. Other than that, this was frackin' DELIGHTFUL. Also, i gotta say, i absolutely love that you traumatized Rin. Reall dastardly deed. Amusing an all hell. |
thepkrmgc chapter 18 . 2/13/2017 and of course john doesnt remember when he actually becomes a hero, and with the curse he's likely to be a master again in the 5th war, any chance of you writing that as well? |
thepkrmgc chapter 17 . 2/13/2017 props to constantine for looking evil in the face and spitting in its eye, because in the end he is a man not a monster, and stuff like that is what makes that distinction clear |
thepkrmgc chapter 16 . 2/13/2017 the nonlinear timeline doesnt do this fic any favors, your trying to show everything so thing get less clear |
thepkrmgc chapter 15 . 2/13/2017 wow, props to kotomine for resisting temptation, good riddance to gilgamesh! |
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 2/13/2017 i somehow suspect that this meeting is only going to leave kirei even more confused... |
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 2/13/2017 yea, it migh have been better to stay with john's pov |
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 2/13/2017 its interesting to see how kireisees himself, no-one envisiones themselves as a monster |
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 2/12/2017 strange times make for strange alliances... |
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 2/12/2017 and another one bites the dust, i wonder how kirei will confront john? |
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 2/12/2017 you do a great job of why john's one of the true heroes in a world full of people like superman, because he's human, and while he has no shortage of flaws he's still trying |
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 2/12/2017 ok, great job using the healing factor as an excuse to make john suffer even more! |
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 2/12/2017 you know, just as we start to sympathise with constantine you make him cross yet another line: great work! |
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 2/12/2017 i wonder what interest kotiome has in constantine, i doubt his place in the profile fic is accidental |