Reviews for The Jewel of the Varia |
---|
LyriaHart chapter 14 . 7/14/2017 this story was a bit sad but it was still sweet. Though j wish the story would have been longer. Please write more Hibari fanfiction. No pressure! |
LovelyAngelYuuki chapter 14 . 2/1/2016 Aaaaawww. So cuuute. A bit quick but not so much that it made the plot confusing. But I loved the idea of Bel's sister and his love for her. |
CrescentMoonXIII chapter 14 . 4/26/2015 I loved this story. It was really good, but it seemed a little rushed. I don't know what other is, but the beginning was really confusing up until when Tamako had to explain her past to Hibari. And in the end, it was really abrupt how it ended just there. I mean, at least you could have them kiss...right? Hope this criticism won't offend you. |
Alice aquabld chapter 14 . 1/2/2015 EPILOGUE ! :333 |
cincinnatus18 chapter 5 . 12/26/2014 What, so someone can't beat Hibari without being accused of belonging to a mafia family? |
Guest chapter 14 . 10/9/2014 It sounds like he has a sister complex. 'My darling sister'... 'The jewel of my life'...his future wife would be jealous of her... |
Guest chapter 13 . 10/9/2014 That was a very quick five minutes. |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/9/2014 Tamako has never mentioned her last name. Nd no one's suspicious? Then again, this IS Namimori, the town that didn't realize there were a bunch of ASSASSINS... And can't she just say that she learnt aikido and a bunch of other martial arts to beat Hibari? |
DragonClanMaster chapter 14 . 9/3/2014 How sweet. |
Allen94 chapter 14 . 5/25/2014 I LOVED IT! :D I like how you put it. I wasn't should how to word what i was thinking but you did it perfectly, awesome job :) |
Allen94 chapter 12 . 5/24/2014 WHAT YOU ONLY HAVE ONE REVIEW WHAT THE HELL! :( okay 1) your story is AMAZING 2) I was reading it and so caught up in it that when my phone rang I had a heart attack and cussed out the person calling ( not the best idea seeing as it was my mom :\ anyway) this story is awesome please update soon :D |
Aleiaa chapter 6 . 5/18/2014 Keep up the good work! :) |