Oh man Clem will never know about Glenn

Can't wait to see the Revamped Version :)

I agree with you. I think Sarah should have lived, and she should have been Clementine's...well Clementine : ). I wanted Nick to get more development as well, because the way he was handled, I wasn't satisfied at all. I was annoyed by the way Sarita died too. If you cut off her arm, it's basically Carlos' death copy-pasted on to her, which is dumb. Arvo shooting Clem was so contrived it's ridiculous. I think Telltale wanted it to make it seem like Kenny was "Right." About him, and while I love Kenny, the writing is really centered towards him.. Not only that but we're kept from telling him about the fact that his sister died, I think that's why he was angry at Clem. But if we told him, I'd like to think he would understand. And I was furious by the was Mike and Bonnie were turned into ooc assholes. Bonnie was sweet and good-hearted. Mike was a good guy too. No random character assasination will change my opinion of them. And yeah, I thought Jane was selfish too. I don't hate her, but she's not really a favorite of mine. I think Luke vs Kenny would be interesting too, I love both of them, but it would be unique because I don't think Luke would do what Jane did. Sorry for long review, I needed to vent my disappointment of S2. Amazing srtory btw, It would be really sad if Clementine did lose her leg, but it would offer an interesting yet tragic point of view. Once again, you write really well! :)

That was sweet hopefully we get Kenny Clem time like this in s3 (not losing a leg) just having a little father/daughter uncle/niece time before you know

that sweet. in the game clem (she does say i lost people i love ) but she never said i love you to anyone ,she care for her group but she never said it let

sell them out sell them out sell them out.

i would like f$$k no i don't truth them there the reason i lost my leg in the first place. why didn't the game give us the choice to said well they lock me in a shed and nick almost shot me

Why rewrite it? I didn't see any problems.

i wouldn't have cover for them i would have told kenny i hate that in the game you can't tell kenny about the shed i wanted to the second i saw him

I don't see it on your profile :( but I'm excited :D

Damn if I were Clementine, I wouldn't know whether to forgive or not. They let her in a shed leading to get bit. However, they helped preventing the infection. The turmoil is aggravating...

Wouldn't that be four people? Clem never said Molly died, and she knew her much better than Ben's teacher. Four people who may still be alive.

WHERES THE UPDATE?!

I really hope you update soon. I'm really getting into the story - I love it. :)

Freaking love this chapter! Luke reasoning for sheltering Nick and explaining some of Luke's back-story was something I would have loved to have seen in the game. Also your Luke seems to parallel to episode 4 Luke which I like. For instance...

In this story Nick is all Luke has left of his old life so he'll go to great lengths to protect him. Whereas in the game Luke will not mention Nick once (well, okay once in episode 5 but still) if he died in episode 2. And in episode 4 he lets his injured best friend whose been shot in shoulder, go out into a trailer park filled with walkers to go and get help. and his reaction to his death makes it sound like Luke hardly cared about Nick at all.

Anyway the highlight of this chapter was giving Luke's and Nick's characters some depth and development they needed. I can also see the irony in this chapter, as Nick has never killed a human before and he will go onto shoot Matthew (if events play out the same, which I think they will) anyway loving the story at this point!