| Reviews for The Lucky One (Rough but want feedback) |
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   A Very Salty Bisexual chapter 1 . 1/21/2018 I love this i can't find any other fan fiction about this fandom and this one comes along and is so amazingly written it leaves me wanting more |
| Gutteridge385 chapter 1 . 3/24/2017 Please keep writing I love this story |
| BunnyBear27 chapter 1 . 7/10/2014 LOVED IT! Hope you come back an write more. To see what direction you will take with this story. |
| IKilledKennyYES chapter 1 . 5/20/2014 It's a good start. I would have liked for you to actually put the dialogue from the movie into the story. Also give Logan, Nana, and maybe even Ben or Keith's points of view on the relationship/ growing relationship between the two. I also notice a spelling error with the time. 7:30 - 5. I really hope you update I would love to read more of this story. Nobody has tried to do a lucky one fanfiction and i'm really glad you are. I hope my feedback has helped. :) |
