Aw, this was such a sweet chapter! I love how you compared them to the characters in Snow White. Their moments were so sweet. Aw, Gray was such a gruff yet sweet guy here, hahaha. I personally see Gruvia as an aftermath to help Gray heal from losing everyone he has, so the end of the chapter kind of symbolized that for me, in its own way. (I kinda see Erza serving as the puppy love in his life, lol). I love this fan fiction!

I am SO happy to have found this fan fiction! I personally think GrayTear lacks so much love that it deserves 3 I love how you expressed Gray's character! It's kind of kawaii to see him like this, if you consider how laid-back he usually is. I also think Gray may have felt this way about Ultear because he had "killed" Ur.

This is so beautiful. I really hope you'll continue it (and your other GrayTear story) in the future.

This is so kawaii... /

One word to describe this: Amazing! I can't say enough good things about this story! I'm a GrayxUltear fan and you pulled it off stunningly! Your descriptions of the characters, of the settings, the emotions; they're all superb. Incredible introspection and exploration of Gray; his thought process and feelings are laid out so well that I was hooked from start to finish.

The interactions too, heart-wrenching, subtle yet full of feeling. You did an excellent job writing for these two and this is by far the best story I've read for them.

Fantastic, fantastic job! I hope you make another chapter!

Interesting, interesting. I'll have to wait to see where this is going...