This.. was beautiful.. Absolutely amazing! I just can't even.. oh my god.. there are no words great enough. Much love.

My love for Bulma just grew even bigger. Wow, what an amazing woman. If I were her situation, I'd probably sacrifice the entire human race after Raditz. But here's this powerless, sexy and strong woman dealing with Saiyan bullshit and surviving it all. I hope by the end of this fic, she's single-handedly killed the entire Saiyan race without even lifting a finger. That would be sickeningly sweet.

The squelch of a heart underfoot...
The bathtub full of blood and a single wrist, slashed wrist hanging out...
The broken prince accepting his fate with anger and reluctance...

Big images that will remain with me from this chapter. Yes, it was very dark. I did wonder from the first chapter if one or both of them were going to die. I didn't expect Bulma's suicide, or "sacrifice". I guess she had the guidance of an angel to know that she wasn't making a huge mistake, but still I was horrified and saddened by her almost-eagerness to die. Without Puella there, Bulma's action would just have seemed one of despair and intense depression. I could relate to Vegeta's thoughts are more. He did not want to die and was less calm about it. The prophesy was a very cruel one. For Izevel to curse so many Vegetas and Bulmas because she'd been betrayed was cruel and selfish and bitter. In a way, Bulma was paying recompense for her actions her as much as Vegeta was for the original Vejita.

I cried when Bulma killed herself.

And again when Vegeta realised she had killed herself to give him the courage and impetuous to die too. A suicide pact. Very disturbing and sad.

Sorry it's taken me so long to review the last chapter! I got exceptionally busy after I read chapter 4, doing a lot of overtime and generally not having time for much of anything except work, but when the busy period was over I guess I forgot to come back to it! I was just thinking this morning about your story, and trying to remember how it ended, and then I was like 'Wait a minute! Did I even read the ending?' Nope. But now that's remedied. It was very gothic. I'd say I enjoyed it, but I don't think that's the right word. It was rather haunting and upsetting. It will stay with me for a long time, either way.

I feel really sorry for all three of them, being manipulated by their visions and their destiny. Perhaps less sorry for the king, as he does keep a sex slave, though he doesn't seem particularly cruel, just thoughtless and morally bankrupt when it comes to feeding his desire.

Puella the angel came out of nowhere! I think if I was Bulma I'd be really pissed off to, but being told that the destiny you had fulfil was to have kids and live happily ever after with the man you love passionately does seem so bad! Assuming it us happily ever after. Vegeta was kind of scary in this chapter, flipping between regretfully considering murdering his father and violent rage and suspicion when he thought Bulma might've beaten him to the punch. It's a bit crazy, is all, and doesn't bode well for his ability not to kill Bulma in rage and jealousy... :( Don't kill your girlfriend, dude.

Oh, wow! It's written in an epic style, and screams Greek tragedy! I am intrigued and excited! We've got Vegeta's impending murder hanging over our heads already and I've got to know the in-between parts, so well played with that story machination!

This story has left me speechless, I'm glad you gave them a happy ending after all, adding to my favorites.

Sex, danger, violence, I love it! Your words capture the carnal nature if their encounter, and the anxiety and helplessness she feels when at his hands. It's sinfully delightful, is what it is. I always judge people's and how they writr based on how they write about sex. I'm not as proficient yet, because I have a lot of issues to work through. But you, you have skills. Word craftsmanship is a rare talent, and you are ine of the few gifted ones out there. Definitely adding you to my favourite authot's list.

A few erros here and there, but still, very well written. I love how you've managed to capture the misery with a hint of glamour. And it's not cheesy, which means yay! I can read it all the way! I'm looking for ward to more!

This is a powerful first chapter. Beautifully written, too!

Loved this! Really well done and full of description (my favorite!). Great effort and it shows!

So touching! This is really a great story. Hope to see more works from you.

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Crying... cannot type... crying...
too much for my little heart... amazing... they deserve to be happy
I'm sorry I can't write a useful review for you, but my mind is... blown away. There are no words to describe what's going on in my mind after this. Only: "Thank you".

This is my favorite story so far, this chapter was my favorite too. I love that you update soon. Everytime I read your plots I can't help my helpless brain to digest your unhealthy, dramatic, twisted style and that's fantastic! I need a moment before start reading chapter 5 and believe me that's amazing!

BEAUTIFUL! This chapter was stunning! The way you ended the story was perfect. Sure, it wasn't a cliche happy ending, but it was delightful nonetheless.

Awww you made me cry! Sure I wasn't expecting this but I don't mind you killing them. Its special this way :D you're brilliant!
-S