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   NorCal.NEH chapter 12 . 9/18/2018 I think that the ANBU guarding naruto prevents the kidnapping or the kids tire themselves out and stay the night and naruto is 'hungry' or 'thirsty' or 'has to use the bathroom' and screams for help when he see's her being kidnapped. |
| crazby chapter 1 . 11/2/2017 Love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/28/2017 Writer, when are you going to finish this story..i've being waiting for a long-long time for you to update & finish it. If you don't want to continue just please delete this story because it's much better for me compare to the time i've being hoping & keep waiting for you to finish it... |
| Mouse-size-Dragon chapter 12 . 11/7/2016 This is great. I'm hoping the boys manage to set up some kind of trap using their superior knowledge, probably pretending like it was meant to be a prank or something, and capture the Kumo kidnapper. (Naruto was practicing his sealing, we have no idea how he managed to accidentally create a functioning trap/barrier seal that captured that guy!) I mean, they have the chance to save one life that frankly wouldn't be a bad thing. They can use their friendships to influence Neji (and Hinata) into being strong even without Hizashi's death. I can't wait to see where you go from here. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/10/2016 more more more more more more |
| NeKo19-94 chapter 12 . 10/3/2016 Next plis |
| darkhuntressxir chapter 12 . 8/15/2016 who is ko... what happened to her? |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/29/2016 More please |
| Lauri3n chapter 12 . 7/27/2016 This is fantastic! I look forward to reading more. |
| tofldh chapter 12 . 7/25/2016 I love this story. It's cute and hurt and comfort and hope and tension...ah, so good! Please update soon! |
| Akane Shinigami chapter 12 . 7/25/2016 Awesome chapter! I love how you've portrayed Hinata! Great job! :D |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/22/2016 This fic is so heartwarming thank you for writing this splendid story |
| sparrowhawk13 chapter 12 . 7/22/2016 Love the chapter! Thanks for sharing! |
| mischeif maker chapter 12 . 7/22/2016 Wow I love how u introduced hinata. She's awesome as a bold child! And wow that cliffhanger at the end is pretty cool too |
| Moon Phoenix Yukira chapter 12 . 7/22/2016 Thanks for updating! I really loved Shisui's story, even though 'heart of vision' sounded a bit strange. I totally understand your reason for bold Hinata. Hinata only became a shy girl after the Cloud Incident, where Hiashi became a more strict and Neji became bitter and Hanabi started over shadowing her. Since Naruto asked to be allowed to bring friends, why not invite Itachi and Shisui? I love reading about them! I can totally imagine mother-hen Itachi looking after the children and Shisui laughing about it next to him. I'll leave the actual plot in your capable hands. Hope you update soon! |
