come on it's NOT complete !

Great story with accurate representation! I enjoyed it :D

I particularly swooned at that part where he gave her the chance to take it back... *Fans self*
Keep it up! I look forward to reading more form you. :)

Wow! That was really sexy and funny

Ok, ok. So the end of this STILL kills me. If feels like there should be a whole saga behind it. I don't know ifI could keep level, tho I know I'd probably have reacted the same way. Idk idk, I just feel like that kinda mind, body, explosion couldn't just stay that way. Aaaahhh. U broke my brain.

This scene was so well written that it feels like it should be part of a larger story. I can say this with a certainty...I very much prefer your stories about Dave and Mindy to the second movie. I am enthralled by "Precocious Crush" and its mirror/alternate story "Only Her", despite its short run. The pacing of this scene was almost perfect. I say almost because I understand it was a one shot scene with little to no set up or idea for future plot, so you could just fit everything you needed into this one scene without having to worry about dealing with things later on or having to build up to it either. It was intense to say the very least. I like how you didn't make everything perfect or exaggerate things. Dave and Mindy seemed like real people...well as real as a hyper trained living weapon and a discount Wolverine can be. lol

Wow damn good you should definitely try a conclusion to this story !

Awesome.

An interesting "first time" for the two of them. It didn't seem like Mindy to be so unsure of herself towards the end, but I guess even she feels doubtful about things from time to time. Loved her snarky comments.

That was some of the most well written smut I've ever read. My only complaint about the story would be that it ended with Mindy having almost no clue where she wanted to go from there. Don't get me wrong, it makes perfect sense considering this is right after it happened but I can't help but wish that the story had gone on a little longer. It would have been nice to them grow closer together afterwords. Not dating, but definately more intimate with the implication that love may blossom (wow, that sounds cheesy) in the future.

I don't know if you intend on continuing this but I would love to see a short follow up peice.

Damn I just had to start reading this at work! :) Great story though, as it is really believeble and both KA and HG are true to their character.

Are you doing a sequel? !? I need more!

Welp... that wasn't the best story to start reading at work. :P However, it was the best Kick-Ass story ever! I have been looking for smut, smut, and more smut and you delivered and more. Not only was it so deliciously smutty that I wished I wasn't at work, but it had depth and feeling in it too. Hats off, because this was excellent.

very nice, well written

Wow...that was REALLY good! This the first M rated Dave and Mindy story I've ever read and it's funny because I was really hopping the one I picked to read was done right. You my friend, did not disappoint! Thank God you wrote this. It would've been such a bummer to read a really cheesy or just overall badly written story. Although I gotta say, I'm a little scared to go read other stories now involving these two. The bar has been set so high! Haha Really good job. I absolutely loved it.

Very well written. Looking forward to more.