Awesome

Great job. Love it.

Oh right in the feels. I am emotionally scared from this fanfic. Really it's well written and stuff, and I do sincerely hope that you continue this fanfic. I love how York and North are Wash's guardian angels and hope to see further of that.
Update soon.
Yours truly,
Wisty

Oh my godddddd! That Connie and Michael scene was too much! X'''3 And that line at the end made me laugh, "I mean Wash, the cat obsessed guy!" XD Thanks for another great chapter!

Yay! Chapter 2! I love this story so much and it makes me cry every time! :'D Pleas keep up the amazing work!

We need more! This is great :D

This is very interesting.

YEAH! *high fives* BUTCH AND WYOMING! OH YEAH! XD XD XD God, I loved this chapter! The scene with North and South was intense, and learning about South... It just made me feel bad for her, despite the fact that she's my least favorite of all the characters, her and Connie... Gah, this chapter was good yet upsetting T_T D Anyways, keep up the amazing work, and stay awesome! D

THIS IS SO SWEET! I'm actually crying right now! D': Thank you so much for posting this!

I think you should do chapters of them being their guardian angles and actually to get into heaven you have to ask Jesus Christ as your savior and to forgive you of your sins

But seriously you should do chapters about this.

Oh god... This was amazing! XD it hurt my feelings so much...! Tork's entire little speech about why they were here was both humorous (because I remember how both Simmons and Grif, and how both Church and Caboose had used it, I found it funny that the freelancers did too) and it was very depressing because he talked about letting Carolina go... O man, wait until he sees her again! XD XD And poor North... I know, South is a traitor, but yet you care for her... You're the best big bro ever! T_T You didn't deserve to die... DX DX XD XD XD anyways, I really love the story! I hope there's another chapter or something! XD if not, that's fine, but this could seriously go for a few more chapters... I don't know, it's up to you XD XD Oh, and I love how York says that he's with the worse fighter... Wait until he sees Wash and Maine vs. Tex or something! XD XD Great job, and so sorry for the really long review... I just couldn't stop XD

Well, this is pretty interesting. Several grammar/spelling errors, but none worth pointing out to you; I'm sure you'll go over them when you have the chance.
I look forward to more. Good job so far.