Reviews for The Orphanage |
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![]() ![]() I want to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yaaay, they adopted Kara. Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kara is so BRAVE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehe which girl... And he thought Kara is cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH Kara is so CUUUUTE, calling Mai and Naru "Mommy" and "Daddy" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! Sent using XYZ FanFiction App for Windows 10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet, brave Kara! I'm so proud of her! I know Naru and Mai will be too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kinda figured it was the boy the kids would see from time to time. I kept thinking "Naru it's the son, not the Father! Figure it out!" I just kept my mouth shut, in case I was wrong. I tend to do that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm... I thought this chapter was plenty exciting. I mean we got to see the wheels turning in Naru's head! He was also very appreciative of both Mai and Kara. I think I said this before... but, I love Kara! I just want to hug her and squeeze her and name her George! (OMG! Where ever did that come from.. Looney Tunes I think just can't remember who said it... Oh well. Doesn't change the fact I really love her!) *grins* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naru! You idiot scientist! When you become lax is usually when something bad happens! Love this fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, Kara is too cute! I love it... Daddy! I can just see the shock on Naru's face and the smirk on Lin's face! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! This is an interesting case! Now to catch up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Daddy!" towards Naru. hook, line, and sinker! Gotta read this first before I jump on to your newest fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I figured it out before the father was crying that he didn't kill all of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked it! I am looking forward to the sequelwatching/reading about how Mai and Naru are going to bring up an 8 year old and how the gang is going to react to the fact that Mai and Naru are now parents will be both interesting and entertaining. |