Reviews for The Orphanage
ace chapter 16 . 1/20/2018
I want to read more
Undertheskys chapter 16 . 12/28/2017
Yaaay, they adopted Kara. Great story
Undertheskys chapter 13 . 12/28/2017
Kara is so BRAVE!
Undertheskys chapter 5 . 12/28/2017
Hehehe which girl... And he thought Kara is cute
Undertheskys chapter 2 . 12/28/2017
OH MY GOSH Kara is so CUUUUTE, calling Mai and Naru "Mommy" and "Daddy"
Candiyce chapter 16 . 11/1/2017
Love this!

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LadyHawke361 chapter 12 . 3/22/2017
Sweet, brave Kara! I'm so proud of her! I know Naru and Mai will be too!
LadyHawke361 chapter 11 . 3/22/2017
I kinda figured it was the boy the kids would see from time to time. I kept thinking "Naru it's the son, not the Father! Figure it out!" I just kept my mouth shut, in case I was wrong. I tend to do that.
LadyHawke361 chapter 9 . 3/22/2017
Umm... I thought this chapter was plenty exciting. I mean we got to see the wheels turning in Naru's head! He was also very appreciative of both Mai and Kara. I think I said this before... but, I love Kara! I just want to hug her and squeeze her and name her George! (OMG! Where ever did that come from.. Looney Tunes I think just can't remember who said it... Oh well. Doesn't change the fact I really love her!) *grins*
LadyHawke361 chapter 3 . 3/22/2017
Naru! You idiot scientist! When you become lax is usually when something bad happens! Love this fic!
LadyHawke361 chapter 2 . 3/22/2017
Haha, Kara is too cute! I love it... Daddy! I can just see the shock on Naru's face and the smirk on Lin's face!
LadyHawke361 chapter 1 . 3/22/2017
Oh! This is an interesting case! Now to catch up!
soulsborne123 chapter 2 . 2/9/2017
"Daddy!" towards Naru. hook, line, and sinker! Gotta read this first before I jump on to your newest fic!
Kirah14 chapter 11 . 12/30/2016
I figured it out before the father was crying that he didn't kill all of them.
Little-bad-Angel chapter 16 . 11/25/2016
I really liked it! I am looking forward to the sequelwatching/reading about how Mai and Naru are going to bring up an 8 year old and how the gang is going to react to the fact that Mai and Naru are now parents will be both interesting and entertaining.
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