Reviews for White Knight Chronicles |
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Forever Free Evergreen chapter 2 . 5/19/2014 Not very much considering the gap between chaps... It also looks like you're rushing this for some reason- although I could be mistaken- try slowing down and taking your time. Let the story come to you on its own instead of forcing it, it'll make it much better. |
Drago pirate chapter 2 . 5/18/2014 This was a good and short chapter. |
Forever Free Evergreen chapter 1 . 5/7/2014 Don't take this the wrong way but this is blunt, possibly rushed & the sentences all all clumped together making it a tad confusing to who says who. |
Dinivas chapter 1 . 5/7/2014 Hi |