Hey, nice job!

Very nice! I enjoy it!

Holy crap! That tugged my heart strings so bad, author-chan! Although Kakashi didn't become the best sensei - mainly because of Kishomoto and how he approached Kakasho's characterization - he became a very headstrong sensei! :)

At the end of the day it was because of that bloody stupid boulder! Gravity why do you do this to us?

Nial (the overly sarcastic bastard you talked to a few months ago)

That was awesome, even if it was really depressing in the middle there. I enjoyed it a lot. Good luck with your future endeavors.

This was a good read. It came across as very genuine and human.

This was great!

Woah... thankss! You did just fine with present tense! The fluidity of this story is ace, it just added to the emotion applied! *sigh* generation to generation: Tsunade - Rin - Sakura. Orochimaru - Kakashi - Sasuke. Jiraiya - Obito - Naruto. :3

You kept everyone in tact with their characterization - plus brownie points! :D Ummm... I don't really know what to say. I promised that I'd give you the LONGEST review but, ehh... gomei! (first world problems are creeping up). X) *laziness*

Thank you for writing this one-shot for me! I appreciate it! (I guess it's my turn to upload ;D) Sorry for the SHORT review. I'll try and kick myself up the backside on your next one-shot/update. :D

Your buddy, Exciled3.