Fantastic story!

LOVE it how Parker messed with Jarod for all he has done to her! lol

GREAT! :D

Very interesting giving Parker more "powers" and how she paid Jarod back. Got some good laughs. But how did MP and Emily meet? Is there another story in the making?

Hi

I just read your story. I loved it Miss Parker get Jaord back for all the things he did to her makes for a great story. I really like that he was stripsearch buy a woman cop. Pay back is good.

very cute.

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Very cool...but u never let us in on what the plan was. I'd have to say this was more Humor/Romance than mystery/Romance.

You should uupdate this like your other fics.

Hey dream? Did you finally finish Whispers? Sort of looks that way. You're always good for a wild romp aren't ya Dream? LOL

Such fun to read! Happy, generally good-natured, and better yet, it ends happily ever after. Loved it - thanks very much for the fun. I should also add that I enjoyed the guys versus the gals. Fun!

This was very good.

I definately want more. This is my favorite.

I love this story I can't wait until u finish it but don't make it a bad ending make it a really good one!

ok dream,

What did you do to make Jarod's face orange? LOL And does MP or the Centre own the warehouse, or who is pressing charges?

Poor Mjr Charles, stuck to the You have to admit it was one of the funnier stunts he played on her though.

Is MP going to add hints dole out peices of his past - to finding his mother like he did to her? Might be interesting to see. Especially now that Margaret has joined the girls... maybe now she will get in the spirit of "payback" and decide to join in a tiny bit on the fun by giving MP things to use against Jarod.

Though you have to know, she would never truly allow MP to hurt him, it is after all her firstborn son. (And hey, won't she be surprised about the boy, JJ?)

It's moving along nicely, keep at it.

Hi

I haven't laughed so hard in my life. I can't wait to read what she does to him next. I agree. He so deserves some payback for what he has put her through over the years.

I love the story. My only suggestion is not to get our hopes up with a fake chapter :-) it certainly was a good idea though if you wanted suggestions. I think that you should throw Jarod some clues about his mother like he throw clues to miss parker about things. Well keep up th greeat work i really enjoy it :-)

What kind of wicked revenge does Ms. Parker plan for Jarod? I think she's got a long chase prepared for him...unless Jarod's mom stops her...or is she going to join in the fun? It's fun having Ms. Parker be on the clue giving end for once. Keep going!