PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!
I know you’ll probably never read this, but:
Whitebeard’s GIVEN NAME is NEWGATE
EDWARD is Whitebeard’s SURNAME
If Marco and Newgate are brothers in this one, it would be Edward Marco, and Edward Newgate, and Marco would be very unlikely to refer to his little brother with their shared surname.

Please don't give up on this! I love it!

Looks promising, please continue!

Awh, this was so cute! I loved Ed seeing Marco off and then Marco freeing Thatch (I guessed it was him, ha! I feel proud :3). I can't wait for Ed and Marco to meet again! I wonder what happened to Marco to make him not a pirate any more? Or was it getting his devil fruit that caused that? I'm curiousss

Oo this seems interesting.. Big bro Marco is the best

*chortles* i thought the little brother would die. Never though he was Newgate. Genius. I hope for more soon and bountiful. Wont hold ya to it though. ;P

What a wonderful story!
Will there be more? I do hope so!
Keep up the good work!

Ooh, this is so exciting! I love the idea~ Please continue soon!

Please continue! I have been hunting for a story about Marco's immortality for so long that I just really want to read this
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This is great, I hope you continue soon please

Please update soon! This is the best story I've read in a while!

No kidding I was actually thinking about this fic just yesterday, and how much I hoped there'd be a new chapter soon, I was so excited when I noticed there actually was one.
But omfg baby Thatch and Marco feelsssss, it's so good but so sad and I really want to see more of it! Thank you for updating!

Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter

Muhahahaha hahaha I've been waiting so long for this! Thank you!

Thatch! Ooh please update soon I'm lovin' this already!