Reviews for Starting Over |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Real sweet! Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful way to address Sam's entry into the team! Thoughts about continuing it through his 360 sim and the "rookie; check!"? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Catch ya on the flip side. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful job. Yep, Sam was definitely smitten with Jules from moment one. It's great seeing Sam's thoughts at the end of the day. Nice to see him falling asleep with thoughts of her filling his dreams instead of bad dreams of what he'd experienced. I'm always excited to see a new story from you. Keep them coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch, poor Sam apparently was never ignored by women before! Teehee, I liked the imagery, slightly wounded Sam looking at Jules but she's just ignoring him. Sam realizing that he's made some dumb ass comments were hilarious. Yeah trying to pick a girl up like that... Kinda dumb. But he's Sam so he's forgiven. Loved the idea of him falling asleep with a certain brunette in his mind. After all, he's been hers since the first day he saw her! Please do write another story again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter Please write jules thoughts of Sam xx |