I adore this story I've read it four times. I like that the parents are paying attention to what is going on with their children. Great job. Thanks for sharing.

hey, I just wanted to let you know that i love the plot. my only issue is that you tell more than show? like there's dialogue but the descriptions between them seem a little awkward? I believe that is something that is fixed with practice, though, so that is my only recommendation. keep writing though

I wish there were alternate endings for the other hosts...

The dialogue seems slightly forced at parts but I can honestly say I really enjoy this plot line as well as the 'keep the parents away from Haruhi' game. The twins always were my favorite...

Yaya! Great story as your stories are!

I really like this story so far!
I couldn't help but notice... it would make it a lot easier if you used more commas. It's a bit confusing... :)
You are very good at writing, your capitalization, spelling, and vocabulary are many times better than a lot of people on this site.

Sweet chapter!

Awe! That was such a sweet proposal!

Loved it!

Loved it! Go Kyoya!

Yay they're finally a couple! Took them long enough to figure out that they liked each other as more than a friend!

Fantastic! Poor Haruhi doesn't realize that she's been kidnapped by Hikaru!

Loved it! Poor Haruhi! Stupid Hikaru!

Loved it! Poor Kyoya,Haruhi,Kaoru, Tamaki, and Ranka!

Uh-oh! Poor Haruhi! Poor Ranka!