Wow your story was AWESOME. I don't read much fan fiction because a lot of them aren't very realistic or well written but yours was so good! I felt like that could actually happen! I will definitely be reading more of your work! :D

This is brilliant! I can well imagine this as an episode and they were both in character under the horrible circumstances. Hated to see Wilson in pain but great to see House taking care of him for a change (am only up to season 5 atm so don't know if that is accurate now). So glad I joined this fandom! Well done on this fic :-)

Really great story :)

That was an amazing fanfiction, I think you did great describing House's psyche and I can never get enough of House and Wilson. I think you did great for a first House story! This goes definitely to my favorites :)

I love this! I'm always wary of death/suicide fics, but you did it really well. I love the portrayal of House as caring, even if it only comes in spurts and is only expressed unconventionally. I think your last couple lines are great, too. Awesome job! I hope you write more soon.

You are like a breath of fresh air. A flower that rises out of a swamp. You are delightfully original, and our boys, so "in-character" that they squeak. I was thoroughly engrossed in your wonderful story from the first paragraph. Please continue with more from the mind where this came from.
Super!

Great GREAT fic! I just read it! Was chapter 5 the last one!?

You are an amazing writer ;)

OMG Feel so bad for Wilson, he really is in a bad place! Hope House can combat his own demons to help his friend out.

Very believable. I can see Wilson planning the grand gesture, then not quite following through. And having House solve Wilson's and the patient's problem simultaneously is very, very good.

I love this story! Wilson is so completely vulnerable and damaged. You can feel Wilson's loneliness as House pulls away. Just want to sit down with Wilson and tell him that everything will be alright. Very touching story. Thanks for sharing.

Love your take on Wilson angst and Houses (in)ability to deal with it. You are expressing Wilson's (and House's) inner turmoil and desperation like an artist. Waiting to see what happens.

Plausible and well written. A very sad glimpse we get to see of what has become of Wilson's life. It is chilling to see how serious his problem really is. Looking forward to read more.

Thank you for this nice story!
I hope that there will be many more House/Wilson fanfictions written by you in the future!

This read like an episode. The House and Wilson scenes are so in character and heart wrenching. Great job, awesome writing.

Very well written, moving story. Another excellent chapter. Waiting to see where you'll take this in the next chapter. Wilson is prone to bottling things up and feeling more unhappy than he is letting on. Have a feeling the angst isn't over.